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It's been years yet I still come back to read your stories. This 3 parter is the best thing I've ever read. I hope you come back someday

I love your Kayla stories!!!! I sat down and read all of 3 of them non-stop literally! I only got up to leave the computer for potty breaks and food breaks because the stories were so good! I've never done that before when reading something!

So, yeah lol I think I got my point across that your fanfictions are awesome! =P

I absolutely loved your story! The plot was wonderful and captivating, I couldn't stop reading. all those flashbacks in this one were really fascinating. Well, before I start ranting, because I can't seem to find the right words and I think you've already heard most of this before... Great story I hope to read something else from you someday.

Cheers!
Bela

I thought your entire Human Hunter trilogy was absolutely brilliant. One of the best stories in any fanfic genre I've ever read. Thank you for writing it. Are you planning on writing anything else or do you write for any other fandoms? I hope you have not abandoned writing! The world needs more of you stories!!

I feel very frustrated because it is difficult to convey just how much I love this story 9as well as the two others.) I'll leave a proper review once I get my words right. Can you please contact me? miss_white_queen@yahoo.com

~ Shay

As always you ending the story beautifully. I can't wait for another. Thank you so much for sharing.

*Sigh* and *sniff* there ends the Kayla trilogy. I love three stories, one of the few that really hold my attention and where I was looking forward to the update every month or so. I love the relationship between Kayla and Ba'naj and their intimate scenes it was just as good as your alternative chapter in Human hunter where Kayla ended up being with Maha’vin. At times I wish there were more scenes with Kayla and Ba'naj. Question though what is the full physical description of both Kayla and Ba'naj? All in all a very good fanfic story, I hope to see more Predator fanfics from you in the near future. Keep up the good work.

NOOOOOO!!! It can't be over. No more potty-mouthed yautja, boy am I glad to hear him back to normal. I was glad to see Sh'lok taking Ta'noj's ring back. Maybe some hint of hope for the mention of them reuniting somewhat in the future, in a future stoy perhaps. Perhaps the new leader reminicing.

Anyway, awesome work Circle. And another awesome story for me to re-read over and over and over again lol.

May those other characters swarm in your head, and form into a massive plot bunny that just will not leave you alone. lol

Wow, so, the saga has finally come to an end. It's been great being able to read through such a large and captivating storyline, I think I'm right in saying this is one of the longest Pred fics around (though I think jemstone still has the longest one :)). But I think it is actually a good thing that you were able to actually put an end on the story, rather than trying to keep it going, which could perhaps leave it unfinished and eventuall abandoned, like others here sadly.

I'll be honest though, I don't think I overall enjoyed this book as I did the first two. Don't get me wrong, it is still an incredible piece of fanfic, and I admittedly loved the whole Ba'naj affair storyline and thought that he and Kayla had some great chemistry (though I still thought their sex scenes were a bit on the short side IMO) as "friends with benefits", but I honestly didn't buy her "falling in love" with him, as that kind of undermined the main point of Book 2 and the ending of Book 1 where Kayla went through so much heartache with Sh'lok. I also didn't like Sh'lok becoming sort of the bad guy at the end, as I felt he was cheated more than she was. Though you did do a good job with her death and made it quite a sad and tragic affair.

I suppose maybe the reason I didn't enjoy this as much was because Kayla just wasn't the main character anymore, and only existed as a flashback. Though I did like how you managed to develop her children's personalities and characters in her stead. I also didn't care for the Jafren plan, of evolving the Yautja, though that's mainly because I personally don't want the Yautja to change, then well, they simply wouldn't be Preds anymore would they?

What heartens me the most is that you still have plans to continue writing, and that is great news because you are one hell of a writer, and I'm sure you can come up with new highly entertaining storylines and characters, perhaps even better than these. In any event, I look forward to what you will think up in the future. But again, bravo for finishing this. :)

Dang, it ended like that! No epiphany for Shlok, but he reclaimed his son. I loved the writing, though I miss the old Shlok. He never tried to understand his human mate enough to fill her needs, so he lost her. I cry, but I'm happy to know she died in love with a male who returned it full measure.