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Was it done to hurt Tanoj somehow? Did someone else kill whatshername son? Why did Kayla stop loving Shlok and he her?
I just can't see an emotionally attached human female sharing her mate. Why does he miss her when he ignored her when he had her? Does Shlok know or suspect who killed her?

One complaint. I wish Lex was wriiten like the experienced female she is not a newbie to their ways as she has been in so many other fics. There can be more than one strong female in a story.

I can't take it I need more! Pleeeaassssse.

ok i have to agree........
we are in desperate need of an update

I'll add to the growing chorus for an update. This section needs some kind of shot in the back to get it going again.

kay? Why was so in love Shlok not mating with Kayla? Did he know about them all along? What does Shravan think about the role his father played in her choice?

So exciting and great reading, but please don't make us wait any longer..pleeeassse!

This was awesome!
So now sa'tesh had reason for wanting her dead. Is he a suspect? I love the whole interaction between him and shravan. It was intense. This chapter gave me a glimpse of the old shravan. And poor Lex, finially understanding her once it was too late. This is a really great chapter circle!

Circle, you deserve all the critical acclaim here and so much more. Your story spanning multiple arcs is truly one of the most well-written works I've had the pleasure of reading. Indeed, everything you have written has been sheer joy to read and soak up. I know I'm in for a treat whenever I see an update to your stories, it truly is one of the highlights of the day whenever it occurs.

Keep up the exception work. :)

I apologize for being so hard on Shlok. It is hard for males, but he wasn't there, or was he? Maybe he lost sight of what mattered most.
I'll try not to take sides cause Kayla asked him to take on Leena. I read it again. It seemed that he had realized much too late that his heart belonged to Kayla. This story leaves me way too curious about his point of view of events.
I still don't like Stephna. Leena is still crazy. This story is still one of the best I've read.

Wow, thanks so much for the reviews! I'm really glad you all like the story so far (so far) :)

I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for a little while now. This chapter was absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great work!

poor kayla,

she must feel really bad with such a mate. it is really sad that he stayed with leena while kayla was fighting for her live. thats more than sad. i tink leena got a child often....

till the point he stayed with leena while kayla fought i thought, ok, he maybe loved kayla but he is only a male. and males are what they are. he is an alien male also. that means, he is different from human and he acts like an alien. because he do what he had learned from his father and so on. maybe if it would not had been leena he had taken another one as his second mate and would have acted the same way with her. maybe with stefna. who knows.....

but when i read that he don't stayed with kayla when she fought for her live I thought, ok, he really prefered leena. maybe he was jealous at kayla because she became elder and he not, like kayla said herself. maybe that was the point he decided to prefer his other mates, especially leena. whe don't know how he acted with stefna... i think in this story the male are above the females and the females look up at their males.
that was destroyed for him when kayla become elder.

before that i tought, ok, he never learned how to handle a human female. he is not really to blame for what he is doing. the yautja males in this story are very driven by their penisses (don't know to describe it otherwise). so, when leena or stefna are in heat, he fucks them till they are out of heat. they are different to kayla. they only take what he gives to them. they don't ask questions. they are submissive and thats much easier for him than a kayla, who has her own mind. they are born for mating and to bear children. nothing more. they don't want to be loved. its enough when he cares... poor live... or maybe not?

It was a big mistake of kayla to convince Sh'lok to take Leena as his second mate. I don't understand why she did that... She should have listen to Kulvir... he was right with all he said...

I ask myself how Sh'lok now fare without Kayla. With females that only care for him and not love him.... If he regret his actions? And I would like to know if Kayla still loved him at the end...