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for Kayla's Revenge

by ZenRose

person LovyDovy
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Freaky Banaj. Mordecai and Linka was sexy. Thanks for updating.
person LovyDovy
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Was it done to hurt Tanoj somehow? Did someone else kill whatshername son? Why did Kayla stop loving Shlok and he her?
I just can't see an emotionally attached human female sharing her mate. Why does he miss her when he ignored her when he had her? Does Shlok know or suspect who killed her?

One complaint. I wish Lex was wriiten like the experienced female she is not a newbie to their ways as she has been in so many other fics. There can be more than one strong female in a story.

I can't take it I need more! Pleeeaassssse.






























person malfan
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i have to agree........
we are in desperate need of an update
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll add to the growing chorus for an update. This section needs some kind of shot in the back to get it going again.
person LovyDovy
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kay? Why was so in love Shlok not mating with Kayla? Did he know about them all along? What does Shravan think about the role his father played in her choice?

So exciting and great reading, but please don't make us wait any longer..pleeeassse!
person Stewie
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome!
So now sa'tesh had reason for wanting her dead. Is he a suspect? I love the whole interaction between him and shravan. It was intense. This chapter gave me a glimpse of the old shravan. And poor Lex, finially understanding her once it was too late. This is a really great chapter circle!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Circle, you deserve all the critical acclaim here and so much more. Your story spanning multiple arcs is truly one of the most well-written works I've had the pleasure of reading. Indeed, everything you have written has been sheer joy to read and soak up. I know I'm in for a treat whenever I see an update to your stories, it truly is one of the highlights of the day whenever it occurs.

Keep up the exception work. :)
person LovyDovy
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for being so hard on Shlok. It is hard for males, but he wasn't there, or was he? Maybe he lost sight of what mattered most.
I'll try not to take sides cause Kayla asked him to take on Leena. I read it again. It seemed that he had realized much too late that his heart belonged to Kayla. This story leaves me way too curious about his point of view of events.
I still don't like Stephna. Leena is still crazy. This story is still one of the best I've read.
person ZenRose
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much for the reviews! I'm really glad you all like the story so far (so far) :)
person Nahau
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for a little while now. This chapter was absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great work!

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