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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Anon. You're not being mean at all! Kayla has a lot of kids, even ones that haven't been mentioned yet so I can understand that the names can be confusing. It will get even more confusing when I start to mention Stef'na's kids, lol. If you e-mail me privately (circle.of.addictions at gmail dot com )I will attempt to make a character tree for you! The only way I know how to do it here is list the character, then all of their kids names, but some I would have to leave out since I haven't posted them yet....
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow another great chapter!.
The little story about Kayla and the food was funny. I like that fact that she didn't accept 'everything' about them.
Kuja character almost remind me of Kayla, but more reserved. Will Su'tara (I think that's how it's spelled) be in the story as well?
So Kayla gave into Ba'naj and they have kids together (green and brown do not make blue!)will it ever come out that it is his kids?
Ugh, once again I cannot wait for another installment.
Oh and I have a feeling that Pahel knows something. How would he know what haunts Ba'naj?
The little story about Kayla and the food was funny. I like that fact that she didn't accept 'everything' about them.
Kuja character almost remind me of Kayla, but more reserved. Will Su'tara (I think that's how it's spelled) be in the story as well?
So Kayla gave into Ba'naj and they have kids together (green and brown do not make blue!)will it ever come out that it is his kids?
Ugh, once again I cannot wait for another installment.
Oh and I have a feeling that Pahel knows something. How would he know what haunts Ba'naj?
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Both with Ta'noj and Jasmine, and Ba'naj and Kayla.
"I will not use the work 'f....' for the remainder of the day." YEAH RIGHT!!! Now that would be a thing to see. He would probably use pork or root, something to do with sex. I'm sure he'd find a way to slip a word in here and there. LOL
Great Chappie Circle.
"I will not use the work 'f....' for the remainder of the day." YEAH RIGHT!!! Now that would be a thing to see. He would probably use pork or root, something to do with sex. I'm sure he'd find a way to slip a word in here and there. LOL
Great Chappie Circle.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So worth waiting for. Thanks for not making us starved readers wait long this time.
Kulvir found out and told his mate didn't he. That jealous hussy...sorry. I don't like her much.
Shlok making the same mistakes or was it a misunderstanding? Why were they not getting along? If he loved her why deny her or was it the other way around? Can't wait to find out.
Kulvir found out and told his mate didn't he. That jealous hussy...sorry. I don't like her much.
Shlok making the same mistakes or was it a misunderstanding? Why were they not getting along? If he loved her why deny her or was it the other way around? Can't wait to find out.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Pahel definitely knows something, I would think being Kayla's doctor he'd know all about her children when he births them (DNA and all).
I'm torn on my feelings for Sh'lok, on the one hand, I'm disappointed that he allowed this to happen, on the other hand, I think the fact that Ba'naj is still alive in the present shows that he maybe never knew at all (otherwise I'm sure one of them would be dead too) about the affair. Oh well, I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, you're awesome circle! :)
Oh, and I completely left out the siblings and Jasmine in my last comments. I love the cohesion you have between them, and how they all carry different attributes of their parents. Ta'noj is definitely going to have to do something to make up for the situation though. :)
I'm torn on my feelings for Sh'lok, on the one hand, I'm disappointed that he allowed this to happen, on the other hand, I think the fact that Ba'naj is still alive in the present shows that he maybe never knew at all (otherwise I'm sure one of them would be dead too) about the affair. Oh well, I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, you're awesome circle! :)
Oh, and I completely left out the siblings and Jasmine in my last comments. I love the cohesion you have between them, and how they all carry different attributes of their parents. Ta'noj is definitely going to have to do something to make up for the situation though. :)
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I LOVE your stories! But I am starting to get really really confused! I can't keep up with all the characters and children and stuff... maybe you can draw up a character tree or something... I am not trying to be mean at all but I really do need one! lol ._. Love your work, keep it up!
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe that she actually gave in! What the hell was she thinking? Now I'm really curious to see who actually killed her. I'm thinking maybe it could have been done out of jealousy...
Can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work!! =D
Can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work!! =D
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm still in awe every time I read another chapter.
I dunno what it is about Kayla and Ba'naj and why it just seems so much more powerful than most other pairings I've read. Maybe it was the big build up to it, or the fact that its so "forbidden" (maybe it's Ba'naj's potty mouth :o) but again, it's just so damn hot when they do their thing. Actually a request on that, I've always envisioned those two to be quite the raunchy pair during sex, (certainly more so than any of Kayla's other lovers) so maybe you could up the ante on their "coupling" for their next encounters (I'm still hoping to read about how their "trial" went back on the homeworld). I especially like it when Ba'naj cusses during their encounters. :)
Still, it makes me wonder just what went wrong with Kayla and Sh'lok since the end of Book 2 when they supposedly made up? Kayla in the flashbacks seems to indicate that Sh'lok is no longer paying her attention (and not even mating with her) and perhaps is again more attentive to Leena (of course, this all can go back on Kaylas shoulders for starting that whole thing in the first place). It also sounds like (inferring from Kuja's remark about some of her siblings eyes) that Kayla perhaps sired several children from Ba'naj which would indicate this little "tryst" isn't so little at all and goes on for years. I also am eager to now read more about the final events leading up to the murder and of course, Kayla's last moments.
Oh well, I've rambled long enough. Just please, keep on writing, you're work is so awesome! :)
On another note, this place has felt somewhat deserted recently. Maybe the Alien vs Predator 2 movie will bring people back?
I dunno what it is about Kayla and Ba'naj and why it just seems so much more powerful than most other pairings I've read. Maybe it was the big build up to it, or the fact that its so "forbidden" (maybe it's Ba'naj's potty mouth :o) but again, it's just so damn hot when they do their thing. Actually a request on that, I've always envisioned those two to be quite the raunchy pair during sex, (certainly more so than any of Kayla's other lovers) so maybe you could up the ante on their "coupling" for their next encounters (I'm still hoping to read about how their "trial" went back on the homeworld). I especially like it when Ba'naj cusses during their encounters. :)
Still, it makes me wonder just what went wrong with Kayla and Sh'lok since the end of Book 2 when they supposedly made up? Kayla in the flashbacks seems to indicate that Sh'lok is no longer paying her attention (and not even mating with her) and perhaps is again more attentive to Leena (of course, this all can go back on Kaylas shoulders for starting that whole thing in the first place). It also sounds like (inferring from Kuja's remark about some of her siblings eyes) that Kayla perhaps sired several children from Ba'naj which would indicate this little "tryst" isn't so little at all and goes on for years. I also am eager to now read more about the final events leading up to the murder and of course, Kayla's last moments.
Oh well, I've rambled long enough. Just please, keep on writing, you're work is so awesome! :)
On another note, this place has felt somewhat deserted recently. Maybe the Alien vs Predator 2 movie will bring people back?
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you for the reviews, and I know what you mean about the desertion. I too hope the movie will stir a few more people to write, or start writing again.
Kayla and Sh'lok relationship will be explained here and there...
Kayla and Sh'lok relationship will be explained here and there...
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say that Ta'noj went from punk to hunk! I love his character now. He's a evil guy with just enough patience to care for someone. Very good!
I didn't expect to read about Kayla brutal fighting. I love how this time you write more about how others feel and see her instead of her point of view. She has more flaws now and I like that, her major flaw is Ba'naj. She cheated plain and it was wrong, but I love how she tried to resist. This is your best yet. Keep it coming!
Oh, and kill Sou'sha, lol
I didn't expect to read about Kayla brutal fighting. I love how this time you write more about how others feel and see her instead of her point of view. She has more flaws now and I like that, her major flaw is Ba'naj. She cheated plain and it was wrong, but I love how she tried to resist. This is your best yet. Keep it coming!
Oh, and kill Sou'sha, lol