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please update SOON!!!
today perhaps?
please????
(Scratchin' like a crack head!)

I love this chapter, you know exactly how to keep the reader in suspense. Please update soon. I want to know what happens next.

How in the heck did you write a story in a story, lol thats awesome!
Now I'm fascinated with Kayla's story and the present story. It's not even confusing, good job! Ba'naj is in way too deep. i think he has something to do with her death. Could he have been so jealous he killed her? I hope there is more Ba'naj/Kayla interactions.

This story is still keeping me hooked. Again, I've said it before, but it just shows how great you are when, even after the death of the main character, you can still keep the story going as strong as ever. Poor Tan'oj, it's been a long time since he's had any female company, he must be in agony. :)

And I simply enjoy the tantalizing teasers of past happenings between Kayla and Ban'aj, can't wait to see how that develops. Please keep on writing, it's so enjoyable. :)

Thankyou! I am sooooo loving this.

Poor Kavita getting no love from her Tanoj. I hate the double standard. I could see Kayla being fed up with it, too being only human and all.

Well I'm looking forward to more. Keep writing gems.

Hello again. It's so nice to see an update. I love it. I can't wait to see more of it. I like the developments thus far. Till next time... =D

Thanks Rosei!
Lovy you ask such good questions, but I can assure you that this story explains everything. Yes one of them do confront Kayla. And there is no Kayla/Jafren offspring. (trying to keep mouth shut so I wont give much away... so.. hard.. to.. do.. lol)
f/m/m was an accident. It should have been f/f/f/m lol. Ok I know thats a lot.

Did Stephna and or Leena confront Kayla about Banaj? I think Stephna has been hiding her true feelings about Kayla and Kulvir for years. She was getting enough of Shlok maybe. One less mate more for her?

Did one of Banaj's family do the crime? Was it a plot to start a war the Jafren spoke of?

How will Shlok's and family react if they should they meet Kayla's Jafren offspring?

Is the new human going to be the one to discover who did it. I saw the FMM pairing note, does that indicate love triangle or sharing a mate the clan way? I have tons of questions cause this story is addicting. Please udate soon.

I love your fic so far. But what else can I expect from a such a great writer. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see what happens between Ta noj and Jasmine. Please update soon.

Ta'noj got that good and evil thing going on!
I need an update!