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for Kayla's Revenge

by ZenRose

schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you decided to continue the series. I am a sad that Kayla is dead since she was the main character. But I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
person JulieL
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're baaaack. HHmmmm, Ba'naj no longer the rude, crude Yautja dude. I wonder. You know me, can't wait for more.
person Kalar
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. I have been a big fan of this series. Please continue, more chapters soon?
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH!!!

I am so sad that Kayla is dead, and that Tan'oj might die too. My two favorite characters.

person ZenRose
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you guys like it so far! I have many more chapters to go... :)
Sorry for the long wait.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Circle, I'm so very glad that you finally posted the long-awaited third portion in Kayla's story (even if it IS minus Kayla). So much has occurred behind the scenes that you're showing to your audience little by little. And that's helping to put some pieces of the puzzle together. I look forward to the next chapter.
person lovydovy
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Its finally here. (weeping)Thankyou!!!

Was it banaj or maybe one of or all of his mates? Will the Kayla's fate be Leena's? Will shlok met Kayla's children of the Jafren? Afeterall they took her eggs.

It was great reading! I'm looking forward to reading more.
person Keen
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!

I'm so happy I could piss!
person chancelor22
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. It's good to see that you are continuing this fic. I really do love it. But it saddens me to see all the changes that have been wrought by one careless persons act. Not only had Kayla made an impact on the lives of the characters she's with, but one me as well! I will miss her greatly. And, I do hope to find out who murdered her and why they would do such a thing. I wait for the next installment. =D
person Lina
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWEOSME!!! But i really LIKED KAYLA!!! I'm a little sad!!!

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