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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it's over? NOOOOOOOOO
Ok I loved how you wrapped it up. It still leave me wanting more. Whats going to happen to Ta'noj? How will it end with Sh'lok and Ba'naj? How will Jasmine baby help the race? Oh my god I can go on and on. But you said you will not continue and sadly I can respect that. I loved each and every one of your stories. The cliff hangers and alternate endings (hey that's a thought, do one for this story too!!!)
You are an amazing writer and I look foward to rereading your wonderful stories. kuddos!
Ok I loved how you wrapped it up. It still leave me wanting more. Whats going to happen to Ta'noj? How will it end with Sh'lok and Ba'naj? How will Jasmine baby help the race? Oh my god I can go on and on. But you said you will not continue and sadly I can respect that. I loved each and every one of your stories. The cliff hangers and alternate endings (hey that's a thought, do one for this story too!!!)
You are an amazing writer and I look foward to rereading your wonderful stories. kuddos!
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thanks. I can't wait to read the little ones story. It would be interesting to hear him narrate his own story or better yet for it to be the spirit of Kayla watching over all. That would be interesting, and though she is gone we'd have that little bit of her thoughts of her family and loves as she looks on through thier trials, tribs and loves. I can't wait for whatever you write next whether it be more of our favorites or someone new. Tootles!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn......I've read this story from the beginning of human hunter and all I hafta say is this story was.........beautifull! God this story was great! I was hooked. It had everything. Ur really talented. Please review asap or ill go nuts!
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I haven't been updating lately! But it's not over. It will be next week.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! Wow, I,ve been reading this for a week! I can,t believe I,m finally finished!I guess this is where it ends...I have thurouly enjoyed myself with all three installments and really do hope to read more of your stories in the futur. This was mind blowing! So much work, I,m amazed at how you managed to pull it all together!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew, I knew he couldn't have killed her out of ire or malice. What a bittersweet twist. They were so close...
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so confused. Shlok loved Kayla, but only mated Leena and kulvir's mate? Why? I still don't get that.
Kayla refused him her affections, yet she wanted them?
That is what started the mess right? Then she didn't?
Somehow Leena took Kayla's place, but Shlok misses Kayla? Did he even want her?
How could Shlok allow this to happen? I wish I could see inside his thick skull and shake some sense into him.
Great story. I just hate the idea of Shlok not having cared for Kayla or her needs in all this. She cpuld have died and he wasn't there for her.
Kayla refused him her affections, yet she wanted them?
That is what started the mess right? Then she didn't?
Somehow Leena took Kayla's place, but Shlok misses Kayla? Did he even want her?
How could Shlok allow this to happen? I wish I could see inside his thick skull and shake some sense into him.
Great story. I just hate the idea of Shlok not having cared for Kayla or her needs in all this. She cpuld have died and he wasn't there for her.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you came back with two chapters! Woo hoo
Ok I'm going to read now!
Ok I'm going to read now!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok lets go over this chapter by chapter, lol
The Jafren completely surprised me. It was nothing like I thought would happen. They were helping Kayla all that time and not themselves.
Jasmine is still a ball of laughter and the child, well that just opened a whole new story. I love the fact that the Jafren could see the Yajutas killing off each other eventually. Everything about that was actually quite convincing, if you have nothing else to hunt, hunt each other.
You could have warned the readers that Kaylas death would be a tear jerker! I actually felt really bad for Ba'naj. As the story is being told I could only think of the past chapters at how he reacts around people and his attitude whenever she was mentioned. It all makes sense now!
Ta'naj reaction surprised me. But it was honorable of him. I do see another fight with him and his father.
Bravo on the excellent chapters. I have a feeling our great story is coming to an end. I hope this isn't the last of you.
The Jafren completely surprised me. It was nothing like I thought would happen. They were helping Kayla all that time and not themselves.
Jasmine is still a ball of laughter and the child, well that just opened a whole new story. I love the fact that the Jafren could see the Yajutas killing off each other eventually. Everything about that was actually quite convincing, if you have nothing else to hunt, hunt each other.
You could have warned the readers that Kaylas death would be a tear jerker! I actually felt really bad for Ba'naj. As the story is being told I could only think of the past chapters at how he reacts around people and his attitude whenever she was mentioned. It all makes sense now!
Ta'naj reaction surprised me. But it was honorable of him. I do see another fight with him and his father.
Bravo on the excellent chapters. I have a feeling our great story is coming to an end. I hope this isn't the last of you.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not trying to flame in the least, but honestly, chapter 18 was silly. This business with the jafen pregnancy is just…awful, Jumping the shark and beneath you. But Chapter 19 was what I have been waiting on! The part where Banaj realizes she is dead is familiar to another story I read here, but just as gut wrenching and its even worse when he is told he killed her with his knife. A real awful situation that plays out well.