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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow the truth is out now.
To bad Kayla had to die missing her.
To bad Kayla had to die missing her.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering whatever happened to Lex's human looking daughter that Kayla held when they first met. Maybe she could help Jasmine adjust with a unique perspective?
Great story, but I miss old sweet tanoj.
It seems Shlok made plenty of time for his other mates why not Kayla whom he claimed to love? Maybe Kayla just gave up on Shlok, but I find it hard to side with Kayla.
The flashbacks help me get it somewhat, but I can't reconcile them ending their relationship without knowing what was going on in his head too. You built them up so, and then done. Please I need to know. I beg bigtime for more. What the heck happened to them?! I cry inside for love lost.
Great story, but I miss old sweet tanoj.
It seems Shlok made plenty of time for his other mates why not Kayla whom he claimed to love? Maybe Kayla just gave up on Shlok, but I find it hard to side with Kayla.
The flashbacks help me get it somewhat, but I can't reconcile them ending their relationship without knowing what was going on in his head too. You built them up so, and then done. Please I need to know. I beg bigtime for more. What the heck happened to them?! I cry inside for love lost.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally love Su'ram's 'Ooman female obtaining plan'. . . "Strangle her, talk to her and throw her over my shoulder, choke her, then we mate.” The poor female. LOL
Ba'naj finally meeting his 'mating' match. Never thought I'd see that day. heehee
I so wanna hurry and read what really happened to Kayla and to see who fights whom. But, I get the feeling that then the wonderful ride will be over. And me no want it to be over. Oh well, then I'll just have to read it ALL over again and relive the ride. :)
Ba'naj finally meeting his 'mating' match. Never thought I'd see that day. heehee
I so wanna hurry and read what really happened to Kayla and to see who fights whom. But, I get the feeling that then the wonderful ride will be over. And me no want it to be over. Oh well, then I'll just have to read it ALL over again and relive the ride. :)
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, that quote from Su'ram is truly genius. I was laughing so hard after reading it, because it's so true yet it isn't. :D
Once again, simply amazing writing this chapter. I really enjoyed the part where Ta'noj is finally reflecting on all he has done and wondering if it was all in vain. Truly, Lo'kesh gave the smartest and most wise answer possible when he simply told him "it's not your fight", which is so true, because it was always Sh'lok and Ba'naj's fight for Kayla. I wonder if Ta'noj now even wonders if his mother was worth avenging?
Well, it will be very interesting to see. I'm still torn on Kayla/Ba'naj somewhat. They clearly have chemistry (possibly more so than any other pairing with the exception of maybe Kul'vir), but I still don't know if they were meant for eachother. Oh well, I'm sure you'll reveal to us your master plan in time circle. :)
Once again, simply amazing writing this chapter. I really enjoyed the part where Ta'noj is finally reflecting on all he has done and wondering if it was all in vain. Truly, Lo'kesh gave the smartest and most wise answer possible when he simply told him "it's not your fight", which is so true, because it was always Sh'lok and Ba'naj's fight for Kayla. I wonder if Ta'noj now even wonders if his mother was worth avenging?
Well, it will be very interesting to see. I'm still torn on Kayla/Ba'naj somewhat. They clearly have chemistry (possibly more so than any other pairing with the exception of maybe Kul'vir), but I still don't know if they were meant for eachother. Oh well, I'm sure you'll reveal to us your master plan in time circle. :)
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im scared to find out what happened to her..youre gonna make me cry i just know it!!!!!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a very odd story but you shouldnt have made kayla's revenge because in a way you have confused me with this one can you explain it to me a bit better i apologise if i sound rude so many emotions in this story it gave me a headache from trying to undeerstand
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why did he do it, or did he? Hopefully, soon you'll stop teasing us. Please don't make us wait another month or more. It is torture ya know? We love quality, and you bring it. Tootles.
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How in the hell can a predator story be so touching! I don't know if I should be angry with Ba'naj for having something to do with Kayla's death or feel sorry for all the pain he's going through. Your story is a emotional roller coaster filled with happiness, sadness, anger and Jasmine :)
I forgot to review the previous chapter. I love the flashbacks, It shows the fall of Kayla and Sh'lok. She wanted more, and Ba'naj gave her that. I love the way Sh'lok showed his true temper with her. Really how submissive did she expect him to be? BUT in a morbid sort of way, she was confessing.
The finial fight scene was great, but now I have to wonder was he easy on her or was she easy on him. That was confusing. It's one of those you're leaving it up to the reader to decide.
Please update soon!! I can't wait to see Ta'noj and Ba'naj in the same room with each other. Or will Sh'lok kill him first.
Oh.... Go Lee'na! Protect your man! lol
I forgot to review the previous chapter. I love the flashbacks, It shows the fall of Kayla and Sh'lok. She wanted more, and Ba'naj gave her that. I love the way Sh'lok showed his true temper with her. Really how submissive did she expect him to be? BUT in a morbid sort of way, she was confessing.
The finial fight scene was great, but now I have to wonder was he easy on her or was she easy on him. That was confusing. It's one of those you're leaving it up to the reader to decide.
Please update soon!! I can't wait to see Ta'noj and Ba'naj in the same room with each other. Or will Sh'lok kill him first.
Oh.... Go Lee'na! Protect your man! lol
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I have loved all your stories and KR is just as wonderful so far. It seems like you update a little bit less often, but I am so glad you are still writing this story. I check for updates regularly.
You are such a great writer! Possibly one of the most talented at AFF. The world youve created in your stories is so believable. Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us!! Please keep it up :)
You are such a great writer! Possibly one of the most talented at AFF. The world youve created in your stories is so believable. Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us!! Please keep it up :)
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I guess it is certain now. Kayla would have been better of with Ne'el or Mahavin than Sh'lok. It still amazes me just how things so fell apart after the conclusion of book 2. Maybe humans just aren't meant to live as long as Kayla did. But then again Lex seemed to turn out ok.
Ok then, so unless Sh'lok has some dual personality, its clear he didn't kill Kayla (though he'd like to now for sure), and though Ba'naj blames himself for her death, others seem to think he wouldn't be capable of doing it. I just can't wait to find out who really killed her. If Kul'vir wasn't dead I would've guessed him.
It looks like Ta'noj is about to find out the truth. I hope the meditation prepared him for it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ok then, so unless Sh'lok has some dual personality, its clear he didn't kill Kayla (though he'd like to now for sure), and though Ba'naj blames himself for her death, others seem to think he wouldn't be capable of doing it. I just can't wait to find out who really killed her. If Kul'vir wasn't dead I would've guessed him.
It looks like Ta'noj is about to find out the truth. I hope the meditation prepared him for it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!