rate_review Reviews

So I guess it is certain now. Kayla would have been better of with Ne'el or Mahavin than Sh'lok. It still amazes me just how things so fell apart after the conclusion of book 2. Maybe humans just aren't meant to live as long as Kayla did. But then again Lex seemed to turn out ok.

Ok then, so unless Sh'lok has some dual personality, its clear he didn't kill Kayla (though he'd like to now for sure), and though Ba'naj blames himself for her death, others seem to think he wouldn't be capable of doing it. I just can't wait to find out who really killed her. If Kul'vir wasn't dead I would've guessed him.

It looks like Ta'noj is about to find out the truth. I hope the meditation prepared him for it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

i say that kayla just need someone to love her since sh'lock took another mate it isnt right she was probably forced into it and then thought she grew to love banja (so hate how this story is turning out its so sad)

My bad. I have been in a 'read but not review' mood lately. Doesn't mean I haven't thorougly enjoyed my reading though XD

Can I have a date like Jasmine's please? hehe

I can see one serious fight scene coming up. Question is, will Sh'lok's rage be his downfall, or will Ba'naj's grief be his.

Can't wait Circle

So, I'm guessing that is going to come to an end soon. As much as I hate to think of it, I am interested to see how it all goes down. Oh, and that little scene with Jasmine and Ta'noj was really hot. I think I may have to go and take a shower to cool down from that one. Keep up the great work and I can't wait till next time. =D

i like the story i truely and hinestly do but i feel bad for kayla she felt unloved tell mekayla will atleast get a proper burial or a happy ending. even in death she still deserves something right......

I love your story, this is SOOOOOO Amazing!!!!!! You are such a great writer, I hope one day that I will have the skills to write stories as you do!!!! Please UPDATE!!!!

It would seem that Kayla thought Banaj would win her from Shlok in the end. If he lost they couldn't have those secret meetings without further reprecussions. So sad, but this story is oh so good.
I still have an ache for the love we thought Kayla and Shlok had, but maybe Banaj simply loved her more, and she must have needed that being only human and all.

Wow, you still know how to just suprise everyone. Zas'hil being Ba'naj's son really threw me for a loop. I certainly didn't see that one coming at all.

Hmm, so Shravan does want Jasmine eh? I wonder how that will work out. Ta'noj didn't seem to mind it, so maybe things won't turn out like how it did with Kayla.

So Ta'noj's meditation is to help him deal with the eventualy reveal of Kayla and Ba'naj. I am definitely eager to see how he will take that, especially since he revered his mother more than anyone.

Good times. I can't wait for more. :)

Ok I didn't see that one coming... zazahill is ba'naj son! Sorry for the misspelling.
I had my own bet going on in my head. I didn't think she would show up. Very hot ritual!
I still love Jasmin's innocents. She's not fitting in to save her life! (Literally)
Yet another fine chapter! And quick too!

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