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thank you~!
I'm glad you all like it...
Sorry for the slow update, but I will start updating about once a week now.

OK, Im doing sort of a 3 in one here since I have done nothing but read your stories for the past week... every day until I got this far. And I have to say it has been Years since a fiction has consumed my life so much. More than even the most addictive book I've ever read. I cant remember the last time I got so enthralled in a story and so attached to characters that are so real, deep and belivable. Seriously Ive cried in a couple of chapter something that usually reserved for the saddest movies.

I cant really choose a favorite character, Besides Kayla... who has been the most amazingly written "round peg in the square hole" character Ive Come accross.. Its probably a tie between Maha'vin or Ban'aj at the moment. I almsot didnt want ot start reading this because I knew it wasnt finished and Id read my way though it and be left hanging!

I have to say... with complete admiration.. that this is by far The BEST work of Fan Fiction (or any ficiton for that matter) that I have ever had the pleasure of reading out of all the universes I have read... Bravo! I look eagerly forward to more! - Maxiewolf

I have to say that the interaction with Ba'naj has to be one of the best thought out writing styles ever. I thought her and Ne'el was my favorite, but now I don't know. I just love the flash backs between them. Very well written and thank you for updating!

I'm really glad that you updated, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

this story is wonderfully written... it took me over 5 days to read all that you have written. i love all the detail that you've put into it. its almost lke watching it unfold on the tv screen. i feel so sorry for Ta’noj for he will be hurt by his mother's betrayal the most. actually when i was reading the 3 different endings i liked the one with Ne'el the most. -chuckles- i just really hate that everythign went so bad between her and Sh'lok. and i can not wait to find out why the Jafren are helping out Ta’noj... is really because of kayla or because of her son... -bounces in seat- i eagarily await the next chapter

Look at this pot boil… More interesting to me now than whom killed Kayla or any other sub story, is what or who are the Jafren and what or who they want. I even wonder if they might play some part in bringing Kayla back. I started to think what we see now could be a vision, something that the Jafren showed her on the ship those many years ago to make her more compliant and understanding. I remember vaguely upon her return, she was told something to the effect that Shar’van was going to be a great leader while Ta’noj was going to be the 'bad-one.' Maybe they told her more than that? And whatever became of the tissues they extracted from her? Are there yet more children that belong to Kayla (half-breed Jafren) or were the samples intended for cloning/harvesting purposes? Talk about things that make you go, “Hmmm...”

So, it is certain. Sh'lok and Kayla were never meant to be. That kind of makes it tough to re-read through the first two books now with the knowledge that all they went through would end up like this. Oh well, its still a grand story, and I suppose for this book, the offspring are the ones in the spotlight.

So Kayla really was going to choose Ba'naj and allow him and Sh'lok to fight for her. I still can't imagine what on earth happened between the end of book 2 and this to make their relationship turn so sour. The Ban'aj/Kayla pairing does really work though, and I've said it before, they're sex scenes are just so very hot, though IMO, I kind of feel they're too short or they end too quickly in comparison to others, but maybe that's just me.

Still so many questions I'm eager for answers to. Who killed Kayla of course is the first. Ba'naj clearly blames himself though no one who he confesses to believes it, and Sh'lok vehemently denied it to Shra'van, and I simply cannot think of another party who'd want Kayla dead. Also, I definitely want to know what the Jafren are really up to. They definitely want something badly that would make them come out and fight.

Please keep on writing, is all I can say! This story is so awesome! :)

What? Are you kidding me? That can't be for real! Now you have to post the next chapter immediately!! I NEED to know what exactly is going on!!!

Great work, keep it up and can't wait till next time. =D

I have so much to say about this chapter!
IT WAS FANTASTIC!!!
It was touching to be reminded of the love between Kayla and Ga'gan. I forgot about the shells.

I love the interactions with Kayla and Ba'naj. It moves the story along greatly. But I think the best line was (where do you wish to come today) WOOO HOO!! LOL

Ptea needs an woman of the year award. Not only did he tell her of his indiscretions but he didn't feel bad about being with her! And she forgave him just like that.

Jasmine is a breath of fresh air for that ship. She is somewhat stupid to the ways of how they live, but she's not trying to fit in, that's why I like her.

The confession was written to make you want more. I want more! Why did he kill her and how! Don't stay away so long next time please.

Getting closer to the truth. So Kayla preferred Banaj? Ouch for poor Shlok. Then again he wasted no time when it came to Leena. Banaj mentioned Kayla's jealousy concerning Shlok, or was it her love denied? It is gripping. I will miss these characters of yours when this story comes to its end.
So Jasmine will have a human looking son. Interesting. I'm not pushing, but that could be a whole other story itself. Great storytelling!