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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad Kavi'ta and Jasmine get on Circle. It's really awesome that you have them helping each other learn each others languages.
Keep it up Circle. Looking forward to the next Chappie.
Keep it up Circle. Looking forward to the next Chappie.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally, I got a chance to sit down and give this new chapter the time it deserves.
I'm afraid I'm going to have to start repeating myself, because I'm definitely running out of great things to say that haven't been said before (maybe I've even said this before too?). In any event, that was just an incredible chapter for character development and writing overall. The interactions between Jasmine and everyone else are so colorful and funny. Interesting idea to have Ta'noj use meditation to control his anger, hopefully that will help, because things will probably get nasty once Shloks ship arrives in a few months as was mentioned.
I'm still kind of worried about Jasmine and her getting close to other males. It probably won't happen, but i could forsee a situation where something kind of like what happened to Kayla might happen to her.
Oh well, this story is awesome, and I'll always been reading it for as long as it continues. :)
I'm afraid I'm going to have to start repeating myself, because I'm definitely running out of great things to say that haven't been said before (maybe I've even said this before too?). In any event, that was just an incredible chapter for character development and writing overall. The interactions between Jasmine and everyone else are so colorful and funny. Interesting idea to have Ta'noj use meditation to control his anger, hopefully that will help, because things will probably get nasty once Shloks ship arrives in a few months as was mentioned.
I'm still kind of worried about Jasmine and her getting close to other males. It probably won't happen, but i could forsee a situation where something kind of like what happened to Kayla might happen to her.
Oh well, this story is awesome, and I'll always been reading it for as long as it continues. :)
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when Zasahil (sp) was begging Kuja i wanted to melt. That scene was so heartfelt.If she doesn't want him I will take him! :?P
Good chapter. Glad to see you're still around.
Good chapter. Glad to see you're still around.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this. I like the character development.
I hope Kuja makes a decison soon or will Zas find out the truth during the ritual?
Will being around a human again heal or reopen Shloks wounds?
I love your story.
I hope Kuja makes a decison soon or will Zas find out the truth during the ritual?
Will being around a human again heal or reopen Shloks wounds?
I love your story.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story, I can't wait to find out who killed Kayla. Please update soon.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again I'm going to have to wholeheartedly echo the sentiments of those calling for more. It's only been a month and yet I feel kind of deprived. Heh, well, I guess these things don't write themselves now do they? I'm sure many authors would wish that were so.
Oh well, still looking forward to the next parts. :)
Oh well, still looking forward to the next parts. :)
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I need more! Come back, I know it haven't been that long, but I'm feening, lol
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two seriously awesome chappies Circle. That Ba'naj is soooo naughty. I hate to think of what Sh'lock will do when he finds out. I hope Jasmine will over come her staring problem. I'd hate to see her speared.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy dance. Jasmine is so naive, and flippant about her responsibity, sadly. Tanoj deserves better from her. I am happy to know the Jafren believe in him, or is it Jasmine they seek? What does he know about Kayla and Banaj?
Shravan likes her, obviously. Will
Will Kuja give in and forgive?
Can hardly wait to find out! Great storytelling.
Shravan likes her, obviously. Will
Will Kuja give in and forgive?
Can hardly wait to find out! Great storytelling.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter filled to the brim with wholesome goodness!
What I've always loved about you is your ability to come up with new situations to place the characters in for every other situation that is resolved. Now that we're past the point of getting Ta'noj and Jasmine safely home, we're getting into more issues between them. You continue to do a great job to show that Jasmine is NOT Kayla, though I'm wondering if history is about to repeat itself. Shra'van being given that coveted spot of being the mate if needed could cause issues, especially since it seems that Shra'van seems to like Jasmine.
Very interesting though that the Jafren are having a ship built for Ta'noj, I really am wondering what their role is in all this? I wonder what Sutara wanted to talk to Ta'noj about? Will she be the one to tell him about Kayla?
Man, so many things I want to know. I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bravo again! :D
What I've always loved about you is your ability to come up with new situations to place the characters in for every other situation that is resolved. Now that we're past the point of getting Ta'noj and Jasmine safely home, we're getting into more issues between them. You continue to do a great job to show that Jasmine is NOT Kayla, though I'm wondering if history is about to repeat itself. Shra'van being given that coveted spot of being the mate if needed could cause issues, especially since it seems that Shra'van seems to like Jasmine.
Very interesting though that the Jafren are having a ship built for Ta'noj, I really am wondering what their role is in all this? I wonder what Sutara wanted to talk to Ta'noj about? Will she be the one to tell him about Kayla?
Man, so many things I want to know. I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bravo again! :D