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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter filled to the brim with wholesome goodness!
What I've always loved about you is your ability to come up with new situations to place the characters in for every other situation that is resolved. Now that we're past the point of getting Ta'noj and Jasmine safely home, we're getting into more issues between them. You continue to do a great job to show that Jasmine is NOT Kayla, though I'm wondering if history is about to repeat itself. Shra'van being given that coveted spot of being the mate if needed could cause issues, especially since it seems that Shra'van seems to like Jasmine.
Very interesting though that the Jafren are having a ship built for Ta'noj, I really am wondering what their role is in all this? I wonder what Sutara wanted to talk to Ta'noj about? Will she be the one to tell him about Kayla?
Man, so many things I want to know. I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bravo again! :D
What I've always loved about you is your ability to come up with new situations to place the characters in for every other situation that is resolved. Now that we're past the point of getting Ta'noj and Jasmine safely home, we're getting into more issues between them. You continue to do a great job to show that Jasmine is NOT Kayla, though I'm wondering if history is about to repeat itself. Shra'van being given that coveted spot of being the mate if needed could cause issues, especially since it seems that Shra'van seems to like Jasmine.
Very interesting though that the Jafren are having a ship built for Ta'noj, I really am wondering what their role is in all this? I wonder what Sutara wanted to talk to Ta'noj about? Will she be the one to tell him about Kayla?
Man, so many things I want to know. I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bravo again! :D
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to upadate. I can't to find out who killed Kayla. Keep up the wonderful work!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah man, It is just so enjoyable when there is an update from you. More wonderful writing. I just really enjoy these characters a lot, and I know I've said that before, but it is so true. This chapter was, like all the others, so well done. The interactions between the siblings and Jasmine is so well thought out and fresh. It's a twist to see how Ka'vita reacted to Jasmine, where it had been stated by others that she would welcome her with open arms, that was quite far from the reality. It will be interesting to see how this little drama plays out.
And of course, even though I don't like her much anymore, I cannot deny the chemistry that Kayla has with Ba'naj, the dialogue between them is just so perfect. I know you've written a couple, but I still want more scenes with these two because it is always such a thrill. This chapter for me kind of solidified that Kayla and Sh'lok no longer cared about one another. Again, it's such a shame that the ending of Book 2 wasn't truly real, and the so-called "healing" that took place between them was just a small "band-aid fix". But hey, it makes for good drama. :)
As usual, I cannot wait to see what more you will come up with.
And of course, even though I don't like her much anymore, I cannot deny the chemistry that Kayla has with Ba'naj, the dialogue between them is just so perfect. I know you've written a couple, but I still want more scenes with these two because it is always such a thrill. This chapter for me kind of solidified that Kayla and Sh'lok no longer cared about one another. Again, it's such a shame that the ending of Book 2 wasn't truly real, and the so-called "healing" that took place between them was just a small "band-aid fix". But hey, it makes for good drama. :)
As usual, I cannot wait to see what more you will come up with.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Day-um!! Wow, that flashback was HOT!!! Great to see an update. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work and hopefully, I'll be able to figure this whole thing out...
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Updates O' regular...sweet.
Kayla seemed to be rejecting Shlok in this chapter where it seemed the opposite in the other. I am confused as to which it truly was.
What happened to Shlok is he just in denial? Did Tanoj fight with him over his potentially losing Kayla to another male if he didn't get his act together? He did notice Kaylas heart racing seeing Banaj.
Maybe Leena didn't like sharing Kayla's affections any more than Shlok? Can't wait to find out. Great writing.
Kayla seemed to be rejecting Shlok in this chapter where it seemed the opposite in the other. I am confused as to which it truly was.
What happened to Shlok is he just in denial? Did Tanoj fight with him over his potentially losing Kayla to another male if he didn't get his act together? He did notice Kaylas heart racing seeing Banaj.
Maybe Leena didn't like sharing Kayla's affections any more than Shlok? Can't wait to find out. Great writing.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was super good!
I have to say that was the best Ba'naj/Kayla moment yet. It was erotic and playful. It showed that despite her cheating ways, she respected Sh'lok enough to not talk about him. I loved it so much I had to go back and read it again.
Kavita reaction to Jasmine was very surprising. She seam to love and understand Ta'noj but I guess it was a form of disrespect,by not asking her permission. Hopefully she will come around.
Great work again Circle!
I have to say that was the best Ba'naj/Kayla moment yet. It was erotic and playful. It showed that despite her cheating ways, she respected Sh'lok enough to not talk about him. I loved it so much I had to go back and read it again.
Kavita reaction to Jasmine was very surprising. She seam to love and understand Ta'noj but I guess it was a form of disrespect,by not asking her permission. Hopefully she will come around.
Great work again Circle!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you've updated once again. I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you,I'll be updating again soon!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I read all three stories at once and I was like, whoa, I missed stuff the first time I read the first story then I was like, Whoot! But then I was like, WTF? Who the hell killed Kayla???? Plus, I was always wondering what an extened version with Ne'el and Maha'vin would be like, or sequals to those two.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally some insight into Shlok, but there must be more. He took Kayla for granted, but I wonder if she tried to break things off with Banaj eventually.
I suspect she was carrying a child when she died. I do not like how she is run by her privates. It makes her seem slutty.
Will seeing another human female with his son enlighten him on the differences he chose not to give Kayla a right to or credit for? She is ultimately a human with human needs, so sad an ending to something that could have been beautiful.
Shlok was crushing on Leena before he mated her remember? Kayla's request was stupid, and she did not follow through when he chose her. I wonder if Stehna played a role, but I guess I am really reaching. I just don't like her.
I suspect she was carrying a child when she died. I do not like how she is run by her privates. It makes her seem slutty.
Will seeing another human female with his son enlighten him on the differences he chose not to give Kayla a right to or credit for? She is ultimately a human with human needs, so sad an ending to something that could have been beautiful.
Shlok was crushing on Leena before he mated her remember? Kayla's request was stupid, and she did not follow through when he chose her. I wonder if Stehna played a role, but I guess I am really reaching. I just don't like her.