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I haven't reviewed for KR yet, but have done so for your previous stories. I read stories in a number of different fandoms, but your series has to be my favorite out of all of them. I'd love to know if you've ever had anything published because you certainly could! Your plotting and skills in weaving an complicated and engaging story are very impressive.

About KR: Like everyone else, I'm very sad that Kayla is gone. We're still getting to see plenty of her, but it's still a great loss to all of us. When you started giving us the back story of Kayla and Ba'naj's romance, I didn't quite know how to feel. It seemed like you were making Kayla do something so out of character. Her character has been vilified, but I keep telling myself that Circle has a plan and a reason for everything! The romance is very sweet and tragic at this point. Shra'van's development is wonderful. I used to absolutely hate him! Ta'noj and Jasmine's courtship and relationship is very well written as well.

Thanks and keep up the excellent work!

Awesome Circle. If there was one male that could combine a kill with some sex it's good ole' Ba'naj. I can't wait to see what happens when Kavi'ta learns about Jasmine, or about what happens when Jasmine finds out she's preggas. OOOO interesting time ahead.

Please continue this story!

Well it is certainly wonderful to hear that you'll be sticking with this story to the end. And who knows how long that may be because from where I'm reading, it would seem that this story could go on for quite a while, and yet still be as fresh and incredibly well written as ever. Also because there are so many things that could be written now due to all the detail and various intertwining stories within. Boy I can't wait for the next chapters. :)

Wow, now that was a chapter that I'd been waiting for a long time. Even got worried that you may have abandoned it like so many authors have done to their stories here. Thankfully, you're still alive and kicking and writing some very kickass scenes. So not only does Ta'noj smooth things over with Jasmine, he even gives her a "gift" as well. :) Also nice to finally hear him own up to killing Ro'shan, it will be interesting to see how Steph'na treats him when he returns.

Ba'naj truly is one hardcore badass. Killing a guy and banging Kayla at the same time. Now I'm still wondering what more Pahel is hiding from everyone. My guess would be illegitimate children (Wajeeh?) with Kayla and the like. That will certainly complicate things in terms of the siblings trying to kill him. I'm still torn on whether Ba'naj killed Kayla or not. Clearly he can become crazy and a berserker when angry, and he does carry tons of guilt around him, but still, something seems off.

Oh well, just goes to show how great your writing is that you can keep us all in attention and wanting more. Hopefully more will come quicker this time. :)

Sorry about the delay. Don't worry I will be around until my last chapter says the end...
I hate uncompleted stories too!

Woot. Glad to see you back. I am still undecided about this one. I have absolutely NO idea who did; but I guess that is the plan, right? Anywayz, keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next installment. =)

i just dont know what to think of kayla anymore....i dont get how she couldve kept doing these things behind shlok's back..im also scared to think that banaj couldve killed her, but maybe shlok did if he found out about her and banaj?! my mind is going crazy!!!! update soonnnn!!!!

Really good!
So Ba'naj did do it? Perhaps. The only person who really knows is Pahel. So you keep us guessing yet again. Cool!
Also I do like how Kayla is not all innocent. She is wrong to have an affair. After all she is human (ooman) and Ba'naj don't strike me as the one who would say no. In the flashback, she seem to be somewhat faithful to Sh'lok. She will not say no if he wanted some, but she don't seem to say no to Ba'naj as well.
Ta'noj is a freak, lol

Wow! Freaky Banaj. Mordecai and Linka was sexy. Thanks for updating.