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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do love this fic!You should update soon.We'll be waitn...If you make us wait to long we'll get angry...
You won't like us when we'r angry.*-*
You won't like us when we'r angry.*-*
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *sues you anyway* What kind of cliffie is that?! I demand you write more missy - what a fricken AWESOME Fic! Loving that you've got it from Davy's point of view so spot on (the laughing was very good XD) *cuddlesome* write more!
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Hollilia (sorry if i misspelled)
When I wrote this I assumed most who read it would have read Lighten Up Would Ye and so would have known my character already... she seems overly strong right now and she will also in the next chapter but it is for good reason, as I hope it comes across later. You're right as well though because I didn't want to make her into 'kung fu barbie' or anything either... but no, she's not going to get her ass kicked real hard, get up and laugh... no way. lol, even I don't like stories like that...
I wrote this chapter after I had a kung fu movie weekend...lol
When I wrote this I assumed most who read it would have read Lighten Up Would Ye and so would have known my character already... she seems overly strong right now and she will also in the next chapter but it is for good reason, as I hope it comes across later. You're right as well though because I didn't want to make her into 'kung fu barbie' or anything either... but no, she's not going to get her ass kicked real hard, get up and laugh... no way. lol, even I don't like stories like that...
I wrote this chapter after I had a kung fu movie weekend...lol
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Cass!
I went and reread the lighten up story! I didn't know the two were connected! Now I see, and understand. You even inspired me to write a Davy-fic. Don't know if Im gonna post it, but still, the inspiration was there! I can't wait for the second chapter.
Ja Ne!
Hollilia
I went and reread the lighten up story! I didn't know the two were connected! Now I see, and understand. You even inspired me to write a Davy-fic. Don't know if Im gonna post it, but still, the inspiration was there! I can't wait for the second chapter.
Ja Ne!
Hollilia
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!! keep it up..is there gonna be more isa/davy?
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was hoping for a prequel or sequel to your other story. And so far I've not been disappointed! I cant wait to read more!!! Update Quick please!!
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I hate giving critisism, and thankfully I don't really have to here! But I assume since you posted it, you want honest feedback so here goes. (Im hoping you'll get so heartbroken that by the time you actually read my advice you'll think , 'Oh, thats not that bad, or mean!' :)) It did seem a little... OmnipotentWarrior-esque, for you that don't speak Holly-ese, that means you made the main chick too strong. Too powerful, too knoledgable, and its kinda hard to relate with her because of it. You havn't really told much about her, so I may be jumping the gun here, and I absolutely believe in Strong Women! But, most people (Meaning me adn the two to three people I live with ;)) get bored with a story if the chick is too predictably strong.
Now, your writing is awesome and your characters inspiring and I am not trying to write your fic for you. If you are into PHantom of the Opera, please, be just as honest with mine.
I can't wait for the second installment! Thank you!
Now, your writing is awesome and your characters inspiring and I am not trying to write your fic for you. If you are into PHantom of the Opera, please, be just as honest with mine.
I can't wait for the second installment! Thank you!