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for The Apocalypse Begins

by slayer-of-evil

schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is English not your first language? If it's not, I would recommend reading a bit more and growing more accustomed the rules of grammar, punctuation, and sentence formatting. If it is your first language...well, the same as above, I suppose.

~Moonstar