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I need more... is there more?!

WOW! I LOVED this! I should have reviewed each chapter, but I could not bring myself to break the narrative. I laughed, I cried, I fell in love with a kid (which I generally cannot stand as OFCs). Your interpretation of Jack was spot on which is rare. Thank you for including the story of the Dutchman at the end. It was evident throughout how elegantly you made use of it. I deeply enjoyed this story and if I didn't have to go to work tomorrow I would be reading the sequel right now.

Cheers, Free

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Really awesome fic!!! Best POTC fic to date!

EEEEP. The last part of chapter two isn't there! Where did it go? Very emotional chapter. You can really feel her pain.

Wonderful. I adore this story whole-heartedly. Often times I dislike children added to the plot, especially, when I'm a Sparrabeth shipper and thats wills son. But I must say little William is adorable and I have grown to love him. I'm so excited to read the sequel!

wow that was awsome ... later for now

angel

Well I just read this through from start to finish. I really like how your explained Jack's relationship with Beckett and the depths that you had with Jack. He has so many faces and depths that go beyond the facade that he puts on for the world to see.

I was crying reading of Will and Elizabeth's reunion, I could see it all so clearly. Well done with that.

The ending was unexpected...and sad. I like Elizabeth her spirit and her courage and I could imagine her doing this.

Great story and I am looking forward to reading the continuation...

I have absolutely fallen in love with the story. Finallly someone acknoledges Elizabeth's struggle between Will and Jack. Most people just totally forget about Will and thrust Jack and Elizabeth together. Granted, I do prefer that pairing because I just find the character of Will to be way too uptight, but that's besides the point. I just adore the intelligent writing and you don't normally find on here. Snogging is nice, but I definitely prefer a plot first and you captured that beautifully. You've managed to show the sexual frustration between Elizabeth and Jack but neither ever act on it, besides that one kiss. I just hope the sequal is as amazing as this one.

Stephanie

I cried! I saw on the J/E board the sequel to this so decided to read first. By God, it was AMAZING! Im going to read the sequel now!
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