rate_review Reviews

Hope you had a nice trip. I hope that you are well rested and your head is clear to start the sequel. Vacations are always nice.

Hey...

I want another update :P not final nuhuh :p

it was so sad, but such a great story I can overlook that. I am already looking forward to the next story, where things will end much more to my liking :) I am sad this story is over but it was exciting and suspenseful every step of the way. Will the next story be a true sequel ( a continuaton of their journey after this one ) ora new plot where jack and elizabeth are the main characters? I really like William ( the little one) and I hope he is in the next story, I like the idea of Jack as a father. I can't wait till the next story is up, I'll check beore I go to work on MOnday. No need to rush , I have been working on my patience :)

I loved that ending. I'm not mad or upset; it was perfect.
And oh the sequel is going to be incredible. I can sense it.

-dislikes Will to extremes- Jack would make the better daddy!!! -nodnodnodnod-

I think I might die! Ive been checking all day. I can't wait until the final chapter is posted. I'm sure it will be great

Hooray! I loved it, I was so glad the chapter as up this morning. There was so much j/e undertones I hardly noticed Will was there! I loved it. It was so well written. I can't wait for the final chapter, and then onwards to the sequel!I really loved this chapter, even though you had me worried before I read it. Thank you for writing this story :)

This is an amazing story, you've played every character (their strengths and weaknesses) perfectly. The "family reunion" was horrible to read, but completely true to the situation...I couldn't help feeling sorry for all of them. I can't wait for Jack's return in the next chapter!

Ooo! What a wicked ending to such an angsty chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, even if it turns out to be a really sad ending. :)

YAY! Seeing the new chapter makes me so happy. but this chapter was SOO sad. I hope Jack changes his mind and turns around. I have no idea what you have in store for us, but I hope it doesn't end as badly as it seems in this chapter. I still love this story even though its gutwrenching. I can't wait until you poast again. I love this story so much! I'm already looking forward to the sequel.