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continue...PLEASE!!!!!

Although, I would have to say the idea of holding a story hostage just to get reviews is not something that I have ever found was appreciated as a reader, nor would I do it as an author, I'm reviewing simply to say that I do like the premise you have and whenever you place more up I'll be interested in reading, however I would suggest that in order to really better the feel, you add a bit more emotion. Even during the points where she was clearly hurting, it seemed to be too forced and not as emotion wreaking as it could have been.

Hey, I'm definitely the diggin the story. I love Reid's assholish (if that's even a word) nature. That's what first attracted me to him, and I just love the conflict between the two characters. It would definitely make for some great sex.

So where's the rest of the story?

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