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hot. i hope there's more

Oh you evil tease. That was a bloody awful cliff hanger. *snickers* showerhead. What a lovely way to get over grief. I'm jealous of the wench, as I almost always am. That is the perfect threesome. And seeing a more dominant Will was lovely. Ooh, I can't wait to read more. I am toying with the idea of writing a POTC myself, it would sort of be an extension of the Johnny fic I'm writing....I use OC's, and I make no apologies for it dammit. There's nothing wrong with OC's, especially when you take the time to make them well rounded. Well, I am off to read your other stuff. ^.^ XXOO

Very delicious, nicely done. ^_^ Can there be more at some point? Please? O:-)

I REALLY wish that you would add another chapter to this fic. This is one of my favorite J/W/E stories. You took my favorite scene from AWE to create it too. For me, the most emotional moment in that film is when Elizabeth has to admit her father has died. I LOVE Will and Jack's reactions to her grief. Will is desperate to save her father for her, and Jack utters that soft and gentle "We're not back, Elizabeth". I believe in that moment that either man would do anything for her, and you took it one step further by having the two men try to lessen her pain by making love to her and showing her she isn't alone. This is what should have happened in the film too. If it were not a Disney production, it just might have happened. Both men should have gone below deck to "make [it] better".

The sex scene was absolutely delicious. I LOVE dominant Will. Bring him back. No one writes him that way, and they really should. He is still caring and decent, but he's also controlling, and it's incredibly sexy. His best lines were "bit bold for someone completely at our mercy" and "what a little harlot...so sensitive...already writhing". May I just say that was YUMMY. Jack was wonderfully in character with his teasing Lizzie to respond to his kiss as well as his amusing banter, and I like his initial hesitation to touch Lizzie until Will gives him permission. My favorite lines from Jack were "Keep still, you impetuous wench...hate to have to tie you down", "interesting...let me try", and "But what a way to die".

Elizabeth had the best line though. It's her "But when do I get to see you?" It also deserves an answer and a second chapter. PLEASE write that chapter. This is far too good a fic to just abandon.

I loved this story are you gonna update soon????? or ever i hope so

Well... I'm not one to read stories with Lizzie, but damn, that was hot!
Please tell me there'll be more... like... some taking

Pretty pretty please?

I love the dominant Will

You must have ESP because I've been dreaming of this exact thing happening since May 18!!!Thanks so much for getting my mind working.Now if you'll excuse me,I've got to wake up the hubby...::insert devilish laugh here::