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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For the love of gawd, could people PLEASE stop writing Mary Sue OC fanfictions of their lame author avatar becoming the center of attention to the Lost Boys!? Star wasn't that annoying and trust me, your lame *** Mary Sue OCs are NO better.
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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's hot.
Update soon please!!!
Update soon please!!!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a short chapter, but a chapter none the less!
It was good but i'm looking forward to some plot and not just raw torture :s
It was good but i'm looking forward to some plot and not just raw torture :s
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and i forgot to ask...
Kallee has been through all of this stuff before, which is fairly traumatic, shouldn't she be more resistint to it, not saying she should completely unfeeling. Every now and then you see glimpses in her character that recognises what is about to happen and then is overcome by hyseria, it would be cool to see some strength in her character.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Kallee has been through all of this stuff before, which is fairly traumatic, shouldn't she be more resistint to it, not saying she should completely unfeeling. Every now and then you see glimpses in her character that recognises what is about to happen and then is overcome by hyseria, it would be cool to see some strength in her character.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! hey! hey!
Nice to see you're back! I only check up on this site every once in awhile so forgive me for not reviewing sooner.
I'm so happy you continued this and was very disappointed when i had already reached the end of the latest chapter.
I thought the last chapter was pretty good and graphic enough too and i admit i wasn't expecting the boys to be so bloodthirsty, guess i was wrong but i still love it!
Looking forward to the next update.
Nice to see you're back! I only check up on this site every once in awhile so forgive me for not reviewing sooner.
I'm so happy you continued this and was very disappointed when i had already reached the end of the latest chapter.
I thought the last chapter was pretty good and graphic enough too and i admit i wasn't expecting the boys to be so bloodthirsty, guess i was wrong but i still love it!
Looking forward to the next update.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like.
Tho you need to run it thru word pad to catch the typos..
(I can say this coz we've known eachother for 20+ years..heh)
I want to know more of her background tho...why she ended up w/ vamps
Tho you need to run it thru word pad to catch the typos..
(I can say this coz we've known eachother for 20+ years..heh)
I want to know more of her background tho...why she ended up w/ vamps
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omgggggg you have to keep going!!!!!don't stop now lovee im invested and I want see where this goes.=P
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitly still with ya, lets get on with it!!! woowho!!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more!! I'm inlove with this story!!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh nice update! i like this story it's interesting, a new take on knowing what the boys are without the classic "i've been sucked into Santa Carla" thing. Not that i am insulting that at all but i likies new things! *whacks bad karma with a stick* may the muse be with you and give us all more to enjoy! *grins*
~Merry~
~Merry~