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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Know what to do(say) next, eh? Yeah, me too darling-Please...I need more soon! It's interesting-at first you say "That is so not like Jack, but with the next one of his "thoughts" you say "Oh thats him alright". So bravo and continue as soon as possible. I like Lizzie she is finally coming to her senses so she could see how amazing Jack is!
See ya!
See ya!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the update!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad they told him that she want himt o be her first but what are they goign to do about will.. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!!! simply fantastic i hope you continue cuz its getting really good
and i think once he takes whats belongs to her she's gonna not juss want
him to take that shes gonna want him to be hers =] i'm hoping
for that lol fantastic as always keep em going
and i think once he takes whats belongs to her she's gonna not juss want
him to take that shes gonna want him to be hers =] i'm hoping
for that lol fantastic as always keep em going
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! May need some grammatical editing, but it is wonderful nontheless!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh nooooooo .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ..
angel
angel
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I loved it, especially when Jack said he didnt just want to fuck her....*sigh* dont we all wish we knew a guy like that at times? He's so sweet, I got butterflies when he said it haha. I cant wait to read the new chapter: will Lizzie sy she's ready or tell him to wait? Either way, it could work out great and have lots of emotional depth to it. Great chapter! Update soon!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep continueing i smell nc-17 coming soon lol, its fantastic =] I LOVE IT
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh cliff hangers! Dammn you :P Got me on the edge of my seat! Cant wait to read more, hurry and update soon!!!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel