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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. I read this on a lark, as I'm usually more of a Jack fan, but I'm not sure I will ever think of Barbossa the same way again...Bravo.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Yay, he doesn't have to sleep in that hammock. lol
Update soon! Your doing great!
Update soon! Your doing great!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oi! Wonderful! I love it. Your doing great! Update soon!
I love the notes idea, by the way. Priceless.
I love the notes idea, by the way. Priceless.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I never thought I'd like Barbossabeth, but I guess I sort of do. Nice job!
I feel so bad for Jack though...even though it was sort of mean when he said to get rid of the child. Elizabeth was 'married' to the man, then cheated on him, then when they were finally together it hurt...and now it's like they hate each other!
Oh well....leaves more room for Barbossa and Elizabeth to be together!
Update soon...
I feel so bad for Jack though...even though it was sort of mean when he said to get rid of the child. Elizabeth was 'married' to the man, then cheated on him, then when they were finally together it hurt...and now it's like they hate each other!
Oh well....leaves more room for Barbossa and Elizabeth to be together!
Update soon...
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm overwhelmed!
I even don't know how to start with my thank yous to you, this is perfection! I'll give you some more feedback in the LJ, but I had to thank you here at first. I'm such a satisfied fangirl now, thanks to you, and I insanly giggle all the time. LOL
I even don't know how to start with my thank yous to you, this is perfection! I'll give you some more feedback in the LJ, but I had to thank you here at first. I'm such a satisfied fangirl now, thanks to you, and I insanly giggle all the time. LOL
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Firstly - thanks a lot for "...grabbed a heavy handful of his hair" and "...Barbossa felt Elizabeht stroking his hair". LOL I'm really the one with the hair. And you're a real friend, Grace! ;)
And then - I love this chapter. You confront them with their (aweful shared) past as enemies, their past when they've been on different sides, and I love how Elizabeth realizes it. She forgot it, she obviously displaced it while she discovered her love to Barbossa.
It seems their love is a dangerous thing, but the violence seems to make it deeper and true.
"... their bond would always be that of love and death, as though one gave rise to the other." One word: This is beauty. And I love it. That's exactly how I see Barbossa & Elizabeth. Thank you for saying this so in "my way". LOL and sigh. Lucky me. ;)
I'll copy this review into LJ, so we can have a little talk. ;)
And then - I love this chapter. You confront them with their (aweful shared) past as enemies, their past when they've been on different sides, and I love how Elizabeth realizes it. She forgot it, she obviously displaced it while she discovered her love to Barbossa.
It seems their love is a dangerous thing, but the violence seems to make it deeper and true.
"... their bond would always be that of love and death, as though one gave rise to the other." One word: This is beauty. And I love it. That's exactly how I see Barbossa & Elizabeth. Thank you for saying this so in "my way". LOL and sigh. Lucky me. ;)
I'll copy this review into LJ, so we can have a little talk. ;)
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AGH!
The frustration!!!
The frustration!!!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SPIT!
...Okay... You just can't stop there. That is wrong on levels of wrongness!
No, I don't hate you... I just need more.
...Okay... You just can't stop there. That is wrong on levels of wrongness!
No, I don't hate you... I just need more.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the change from last chapter to this chapter was handled brilliantly and it was very beautiful. at one point, i literally sighed.
you are so right. as much happiness as i'm sure you would bring me, i already have my line up: M-F-St-Sn belong to Davy Jones and his wonderful beard of tentacles, T-W-Th belong to Barbossa and his talented hands and mouth.
you are so right. as much happiness as i'm sure you would bring me, i already have my line up: M-F-St-Sn belong to Davy Jones and his wonderful beard of tentacles, T-W-Th belong to Barbossa and his talented hands and mouth.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great, great chapter! And hot! Very hot!
I love that argument of them while they're fucking, and I love Elizabeth's "I love you" and that she even don't know she said it out loud - and Barbossa's reaction.
You did a great job - and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and the next one and... you know!
Thanks for sharing. ;)
I love that argument of them while they're fucking, and I love Elizabeth's "I love you" and that she even don't know she said it out loud - and Barbossa's reaction.
You did a great job - and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and the next one and... you know!
Thanks for sharing. ;)