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Hi there i thought that i would let you know how much i'm enjoying this story and can't wait to find out what will happen between Tempest and the Lost Boys and how their relationships with her will develop. I hope that Star and Michael don't get turned 'cause they wre the two charecters that i personally didn't like, anyways i hope that you update soon as i really want to find out what happens next. lol

Thank you Too Much.Too Late! I tried hard to make the boys SEEM like the boys. I know it's a very hard thing to do in fanfiction but I sat here typing and watching the movie at the same time just so I could have their characters as true to form as possible. My was THAT a hardship lol! Not! Heh I love that movie and I use any excuse to watch it. I promise Star and Michael won't be in this story for much longer, I don't really care for Star all that much and Michael, while weak willed when it comes to females, is an ok character BUT I don't want him mucking things up in this story. Next chapter is halfway done already and there will be more action, in more ways than one lol. The Frog brothers will be coming into the picture soon, too, but don't worry the boys won't die! I can't allow that to happen in my story, that's what I hated about the movie. I always wanted the boys to win, not get killed. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the next chapter and please review, let me know what you think. If you have any ideas please let me know and I will try to work them into the story. Thanks for your opinion, I agree with you.

I really love this story. It is great and quintessentially Lost Boys! I personally don't like Star and Michael that much. So if you do turn them, which you have to do unless you want to kill them (right?), please, oh please, make them go away!!! Or on second thought you can kill them if you want. I kinda like the idea of Lucy become a vampire and being Max's wife and staying Tempest's mom. And I love Sam so either keep him human but nice or turn him. Those are my votes. Update soon because it is so rare to find good Lost Boy fics.

Thank you so much for your great review, hysteria. I can promise you this story is going to be updated often. I have already started working on the next chapter and it's promising to be as long, if not longer than, the first. I have most of my plot already written in my trusty notebook so there's no worry that i'll get writer's block. All I have to do now is flesh it out which, in this fandom at least, seems to be rather easy. I will have the next chapter up either late tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I hope you enjoy this next chapter, i'm rather pleased with it so far. Heh this just gives me an excuse to keep the boys alive like I wanted in the movie. Anyway thanks again and happy reading! :-D