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Wow this was a fantastic sequel to the flying dutchman! I absolutely loved it! You are a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

JackSparrowsWench

Wow... this was absolutely brilliant! I saw this recommended somewhere, and I'm so glad I read it. I loved how you seemed to capture all the characters incredibly well and keep them true to the PotC universe. But at the same time, this was so different from anything I expected! I've read several lengthy stories about what happens to Jack, Elizabeth, Will, and company after AWE, but most stories that use Tia Dalma/Calypso always have her supporting or aiding our pirate gang. I liked this because it was the complete opposite - Calypso was pissed and scheming against them the whole time. And Jack as a demi-god, that was a great touch! And actually, it made so much sense! The ending was beautiful and made me cry, so that is always a mark of a great fic!

This really was one the best PotC stories I've read. Thank you so much for posting it! I really hope you consider writing more!!!

This will sound harsh, insulting or flame worthy but it's really not. I'd just rather not be in a position to say it. You people really get on my damned nerves! Or rather the part of "you people" that write good smut. borderline but tolerable good smut, smut free fanfic, or worse still, good smut containing fic that is still good even if take the smut out. I am *SO* freakin jealous! I have very close to no imagination at all. You want terrorism, guerilla warfare, middle east politics and the current global situation explained? I'm your girl...from a variety of perspectives. However any fanfic I'd write would make all but the worst mary jane look like a literary masterpiece. I want a decent fictional universe imagination. So unfair....

you're wonderful! thank you so much for putting this first. hope school goes well for you...can't wait for the next installment

Oh God, that was brilliant. I'm not even lying when I said I was tearing up the entire way through, and crying by the end of it. You kept all the characters in context whilst all the while really making you feel their predicaments. And for one I wasn't just crying for Jack and Elizabeth - you had William feeling abandoned, alone and betrayed by all those he loved, Will who was losing his life, and his first love. Teague who missed Savarna so much and Pintel and Ragetti. It was truly brilliant. I was so shocked when Elizabeth hurt herself, I really thought she was going to die.
Brilliant, original story and I wait earnestly for your final part of the story. After this you should write another - you really have a flair for this writing business.
Enjoy your first weeks back at school
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I'm speechless. Nope, no words. Just speechless.

how i've waited for this chapter...you've got to update soon soon soon!!! everyday i've checked to see if there's been a posting! wonderful work you're one of the best out there. i'm spoiled!

masterfully written and so perfectly positioned to entice and enthrall your readers! A world tipping between disaster and delight, heaven and hell--or just a typical day for Jack. I'm loving this!

This is NOT good. So now Tia's plan is revealed but why? Why does she want that? Glad to hear things are settling down for you! Update soon if you can!

*bounces* You shoulda heard the squeal I made when I saw this story was updated. [I'm pretty sure you did, too, it was LOUD]

LOVELY!! Lovely, lovely, they are together and they WILL get William back and hopefully everything will be settled. But I have no clue; I am not writing this story, so please update soon!!!

[Psst... it seems to me like you didn't close out with a in one spot, for the whole rest of the chapter is in italics! Just to let you know, hun!! :)]