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YAY thank you so much for the latest chaoter, I LOVED it so much. I really liked the rendevous between j/e. Truly great. Very sweet and romantic without being sappy. Great job!! Please write the next part very soon, Good luck with classes. I check for updates every morning before I go to class myself :)

Awwh lol. Loved that chapter, especially Elizabeth and Teague together with Jack coming in,
"He’s old enough to be your grandfather, you know.” Haha it made me laugh, then the part with Ina "Are you jealous of me and your father?" "No...should I be?" "Should I be jealous of you and Ina?" "Are you?"
Haha this chapter was sweet and funny, and glad Jack and Elizabeth finally admitted their feelings to each other. And that kiss, loved it! Hot, passionate kisses are good but I love soft, sweet ones too; they really show the love between the two, not just the desire and passion.
Cant wait for the update!
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WOW. I can't wait for you to update again! So very good. **happy sigh**

Wow.
I've been reading potc fanfics for years (a lottt of stories) and I must say this reaches somewhere within the top 3 favorites of mine maybe #1. Its really amazing. And you haven't even gotten them hooking up yet! Damn ur good.
Please write as much as you can as fast as you can don't stop for any reason!

P.s. As you asked about a trilogy n the such, deffinitly go for it. I'd like to see jack n liz together, I don't no about lil will I love him but he can't alllways be around maybe give him a playmate, I like the sparrows relationship together
I like how in the first story jack lived with liz just to win her over and was all cunning and suggestive, just thought I'd add that lol

Wow, Im Blown Away...Ur Story is Amazing, Ive Enjoyed Both This 1 And The Flying Dutchman...U Are Truly Very Talented, U present The Characters so well and the storyline is so gripping!! well done!!! xx Jenn xx

Awwh such a awesome chapter, Im glad Jack and Elizabeth had an argument - it helped get everything out in the open and have them sort their differences out. But I'm still not sure everything is sorted out between them, atleast not yet. Jack never questioned why she chose death over him (or did she? I might have missed it, I'll read it again in a sec) or is he just okay with that and understands her motive? Whatever, it was a brilliant chapter!

I dont like Will at all but at the end it sounded like he was turning pure scary evil? I kinda would like to see him happy because if not he'll constantly be after Jack and Lizzie. Im sure you could get him happy somehow? I think Lizabeth needs to talk to him too, but without hurting Jack obviously. Is Jack going to stab the heart? or not? I know which way I'd prefer it to go but I'm sure you could make it work out brilliantly whichever way you took it! :)
Im enjoying your story so much and cant wait for the next update!
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Ohhhhh such a good plot....I think that Jack should show some god powers or something in like a final fight ............. and elizabeth and jack getting 2gether while william is ...well not sure what

wow ... i hope they can set things right ...please please update soon .. later for now

angel

So great to get an update! Glad Elizabeth has finally been rescued. Looking forward to how she sorts everything out with Jack.

OMG, Calypso is back!
That chapter was sweet and I think I can imagine why Lizzie wanted Ina to leave the cabin that very moment.... perhaps a little pang of jealousy? ;o)
Oh and Teague calling Jack "Jackie" is always wonderful - reminds me so much of the movie!
Btw: I think in chapter seven and eight are the last parts missing! I checked your story over at ff.net and found the rest there. Perhaps something with the formatting went wrong? Anyway, I thought I'd let you know.
Take care and please keep up your very outstanding Masterpiece! I love it all the way.
Ta,
~Sassy~