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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally, I feel we're one step closer to getting Lizzie back :] And I began to feel more sorry for Jack in this 'She chose death over love' Made me feel for Jack, I dont know why haha. Too hard to explain. Glad youre feeling better, cant wait for an update!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Great as always! I am glad you wrote another chapter. I can't wait to see that happens with Teague. I think he and william will get along better than himself and Jack, don't know why. Hope you update again tomorrow, but that's just being wishful :)
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. that was great .. please please more ... later for now
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you wrote another chapter. I hope you feel better soon. I have a 1/2 day stomach virus so i feel your misery. I am also going to read deathly hallows too but I will still be anxious for your chapter 5. I think I will like your story much more than the last harry potter book ( DH is much more depressing) Feel better !!
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh change in plot! Love it :p
Though...please say that in your version they weren't lovers :p would be awkward!
Though...please say that in your version they weren't lovers :p would be awkward!
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... tia dalma is his grandma wow ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and especially Jacks line about his and Williams bond being deeper than blood. And Tia's appeaance at the end...hmm....trouble afoot? :P Cant wait for the update, but I understand you have other things too. I would have replied earlier but I just read Harry Potter 7 in 12 hours, including cooking and shopping inbetween. Quite an amazing book, hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Hope you're feeling better soon, your meds didn't affect your fantastic (in a negative way, anyway) writing one bit. Curious to know more about Jack's place in the society he left.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So great! and what a c cliffhanger. I loved chapter 3. Such a great story with such an original plot. I can't wait to see what happens. What did thet tattoo on Williams back? Is that what they were doing? I can't wait to find out. Thanks for the neew chapter!
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Im glad we're finally in Madagascar, it seems we're one step closer to rescuing Lizzie! Cant wait for the new update, hope you're better too!
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