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wow .. that was awsome ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Great so far! Very excited to see that Capt. Teague will have a part in this story. Can't wait until there's more!

I really hope you write another chapter tonight. I love having something to think about during the dreary hours of work. I love this story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next

YAY Wonderful, I love this idea of you poasting chapters as soon as you finish them. Your grammar and syntax is usually great. I appreciate the quickness of your chapters. I like the interaction between Jack and William and how he is sharing his family history. I thought ch 2 was very sweet. I look forward to see what you come up with for chapter 3. It's getting harder and harder to top yourself with each previous chapter being so great.Thank you for taking the time to write this story!

wow, i didnt realize you'd updated! Fat serice :P Im glad Jacks finally had an idea, though I hope they dont get too many delays in saving Lizzie - I miss her already, and no doubt Jack and William are missing her more than you could explain. Great chapter, Jacks a very learned man but what could you expect? Its Captain Jack Sparrow
Loved it, cant wait for the update. It'd be great to see how Lizzie is coping wherever she is - The locker?
Im gonna email you in a minute, I have a question but I just gotta do something :P
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WONDERFUL! I loved the first chapter sooo much. It seems it will be just as great if not better than the first story. I'm glad your style of writing is the same, its very unique. Please write more soon! There are so many directions for this story to go. I love the interactionbetween Jack and William. Its only a matter of time before he calss him his fater for real, and not a charade. I hope you are as quick with your updates as you were with the last story, new chapters before going to work make my day!!!!

Ahh damn, I swear Im pregnant. I have the hormones of a pregnant woman anyway, Im crying again. I can't believe Elizabeth is gone, I just finished watching DMC and I have the same feeling I do now as when Jack dies. We are going to see Lizzie again arent we!? I never said any of this on my other comment so sorry if its long here.

I always thought Jack would make a good family guy, even if he never admits it. He would be a great dad, and funny and leniant too. When he left...heartbreaking! =[ And then Will coming back, I knew there'd be problems when Jack was mentioned. He can't expect William (Will is the father, William is the son, thats how Im going savvy?) to warm to him immediately. He was terrible to William, Lizzie Jack and Will made a great little family. Haha i thought when the neighbours first met Jack that he was gonna flirt outrageously with them to make Lizzie jealous :P

I love your story, can't wait for an update and hope to see Lizzie soon. I want to see what happens, does she choose Jack? Does she encounter Will again? I love Sparrabeth and I always knew she loved them both but the fact is theres more between her and Jack than her and Will. Plus Jacks going to be in Williams life more than Will.

Just one thing I was slightly confused about (Its late!!! :P) Did Lizzie die? And is she in the Locker? Or on the FD? I am slightly confused as to where she is. Or is she still alive? Please could you clarify for this ditz? =D

Great story, update soon!
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