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Please please PLEASE continue with this story! Honestly, I've been through almost all of the stories posed on this website and yours by far is one of the very best I've seen.

I love this story please continue. Though I think Jareth should be more into BDSM then the story has him right now. I wouldn't mind a dark Jareth... Thanks again and please continue.

Wow! This is FANTASTIC. Wonderfully original and beautifully written. I really, really enjoyed it thus far, and I hope to see more.

That was a beautifully written story. I loved the vocabulary you used (I even learned a couple of new words!). I'm not sure if there's more to come or not, but if there is, I can't wait to read it.

Upda-a-a-a-ate ... Seriously - where'd you go? It's been a while since you updated! This fic makes my skin crawl, but in a good way. Although I'm not crazy about the name "Legacy." But that's a minor quibble - please please please update!

I sincerely hope that you have not stopped updating because you think that your story has received too little reviews. Your hit count is not that bad. I'ts probably true that most Labyrinth fans don't like that kind of stories too much, but if you're not going to continue it in quite the same vein with Jareth, you have a good chance of attracting more readers. It's also true that there are many stories of that type around (although not in Labyrinth fandom), and your story as such is not very original. What makes it more intriguing is exactly the fact that it's a Labyrinth story. And the inclusion of Jareth in your story has definitely made it more interesting for Labyrinth fan fiction readers. I, for one, am now dying to find out what happens next.

I think I have to explain something. By "not continuing it in quite the same vein with Jareth" I mean that it seems like he won't be as cruel towards Sarah as Goroth was. But I don't expect him to fall in love with her right away and become the all loving, caring, tender, sweet and otherwise perfect dream lover. I expect that Jareth will indeed punish Sarah, if, encouraged by his kind attitude, she will become something like her old self again and overstep her boundaries as a slave.

I enjoy your story very much and awaiting the next chapter, please hurry!

Great story!!!! XD

Well, that certainly answers my question. I'm Glad things are looking up for Sarah. ^_^
I still wonder what will happen next though... if they're going to have any complications, especially if Jareth might happen to remember.

Now this latest chapter is getting intersting. I was wondering if the Goblin King would ever show up, or if it would be just a story about Sarah. I wonder if Jareth will be better, or worse than the Troll king.