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All of chapter 11 didn't make it. There's just one sentence.

Okay, so I obviously made a blunder. What I thought was a good idea (having only eight words in one page) was obvisouly misunderstood. I stand corrected :) Chapter 11 is hereby re-edited. Power to the people, savvy?

My undying love to all you reviewers!

Thank the gods. An update. I was going crazy here. I've been checking at least twice a day... I'm serious, I used to get to AFF.net and check the Harry Potter section first, then maybe I would look at the other ones. Now I check Troy first and then the rest. See what you did to me? :)

Wow, he is really in trouble isn't he? The king, I mean. Paris is way too gone for him to make it right in only a month or two.

And he has some real problems with his warlords. Will they kill him? I hope not, I'm kind of hoping for Paris and the king to get back together. I just don't see how.

Oh, and how does the court works? I know that there are demons, humans, ghosts, hybrids... is there an hierarchy? (did I spell that one right?) How does your hell works? Who is in war with who?

Well, I hope you update soon. I'll be waiting.

I love this story i'm so glad you updated ^-^

What happen to chapter 11? I mean, I've seen some short chapters but this one takes the prize. :)

"The rage almost killed him on the spot."

That is it? 8 words? Sorry, I don't think so. Get back in here and give us some more.

Oh, the plot thickens. The boys are now grown ups... the demons are not much for childhood are they? It makes sense, I think. But how will that play with the whole situation with Paris and the demon king? Can they bring the third child back to life?

Ohh, the king is seeing the pearl. Will Paris be reborn as Will? I don't see Elizabeth too happy about this whole demon king thing. Too bad for her. Maybe that is exactly what Paris needs to recover from his time as a whore.

Plus, imortality... very good. :) Please update soon.

I love your story. Though it's sort of sad what happens to the third child and how the other two grow up so fast. I hope you keep updating cause I hate it when people stops on such a good story! Hope paris have a girl instead. It would quite a surprise. Bet she'll grow up to be a little devil.

Perfect ending to the chapter, I was on the edge of my seat looking for the "next chapter" button for a full five minutes before realizing there was none. I'm such an idiot. Please update when you have the time, thank you for writing such an interesting story.

Yes, a new chapter. A new chapter! Did you know that I check the 'Troy' list everyday now just to see if you updated?

I know... well, I hope things will work out in the end, but I don't see an easy way for this to happen. Paris is too broken and the king too clueless - a recepie for disaster.

It will be fun to read. :) Please update soon.

The last two chapters were so beautiful, this story is turning into a favorite very quickly. Keep up the good work and update whenever you find the time!