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person Sakya
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how come I didn't see this one before? I must be getting old... well, older. hehehe

I like it but I did miss a bit more description of how was their life in the first two and a half years and why did Paris fall from grace with the king. No need to go back now - I hate when the hero suffers - just a little reminder for next time.

Please update soon.
person IamM
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful story! Beautifully written, I must say. Please continue when you find the time, it's such an interesting plot line!
person leggolust
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great! I already love Troy fanfiction, and here I get a fantastic alternate universe story connected to my other favorite fandom, Pirates of the Carribean. Thanks for writing, and I look forward to the next update.
person Wick
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... love your stories!!!... especially this fic.

Please do continue updating, looking forward to futher update for both fic.
person bloomingbust
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that asshole he should know paris would never betray him!!!!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn PARIS should have sadi he didn't do anything and what did the DEMON KING expect that PARIS would welcome him with open arms. He has some serious work to do to get back PARIS's trust
person Livaof golm
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i love this story.
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn the demon king is stupid. how could he not ask paris if he cheated. ASSHOLE!!!!!!
and now paris has been raped repeatedly and has lost a child, and doesn't know his two children. like I said an ASSHOLE and STUPID!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!!! i WANNA SEE HOW HE IS GOING TO MAKE THIS UP TO PARIS
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh no poor paris
person Ishki
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting story, please update soon!!!!