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for Unnaturally Beautiful

by acaciac123

person Vittani
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the most amazing thing ive ever read. i absolutely love it. Is there anyway you could email me when you update?

Vittani@aol.com
person Vittani
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh and ignore that stupid cow who reviewed earlier, who does she think she is. I love slash but i have never read a manga in my life. Dont really even know what they're like apart from the covers. Love this and i so want the next part.
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I personally advise you to just ingore the person who flamed you. she's so ingorant.... as I said in my rant/author notes (that I have to yet to post):
" That person really made A LOT of assumptions there. There’s plenty of people who love slash who doesn’t even read Manga at all. So of course, how would they know about there being a Labyrinth Manga before writing a gay story for Labyrith? Second, not all the “Yaoi people” love turning everyone gay.
I’m a huge Yaoi fan, but I don’t go running around going: “Mmm, That hot guy and this guy should be gay!”. Heck, while I think Jareth could easily swing both ways (honestly have you seen the way he dresses? Way too well dressed for an completely straight person)… I’ve been always a supporter of the whole Sarah/Jareth pairing (while remaining open to other pairings). So that whole “You yaoi people just love turning EVERYONE gay!!” was really rude and condsending!"

I actually like this story very much! There's not alot of Toby/Jareth stories, much less gay ones....so it's always nice to see something new and refreshing amongst all the same old, tired Sarah/Jareth pairings... Even though I'm writing a Jareth/Sarah pairing myself. ^^;;
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM

As far as Im concerned, that manga dosent count. What counts is the film that I remember from being seven years old. I know you yaoi obsessed people love turning everyone gay, but hush child. The personality and psychology of the character doesent support it, and I really dont care two shits about the comic. Typical manga garbage. Go back to your comic books children, and leave the real stuff to those whove seen the same character staring back at us for twenty years. Gay. PLEASE. Im bisexual, and if you read my profile, I have M/M stuff written myself. So I dont mind or am I disgusted by it. But in this case, it dosent match, and its rather unsettling. And something tells me this story will just end up in the many black holes in this section anyway. Next time..WATCH THE MOVIE. And leave the characters from it there, where they were meant to be. Unless youre Frank R. Miller, keep your nose where it dosent belong. Get it. GOOD. If you wanna talk about it further, my AIM is lateralus6662002.

R
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay this is the author checking in because I don't want this to go any further. Ryanne_Homicide I understand what you're saying and I'm definately not in support of of the turn everyone everywhere gay fic that seems to be popping up more and more frequently - this is just the story I wanted to tell. And to anyone who wants to argue for either side I'm all for it - I have nothing against either interpretation. But it does have a m/m warning in the description so if you don't agree to it don't read it.

I thank both of you for your compliments though and I hope both of you will continue to read and write for this fandom.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM

This is well written, but I just cannot see Jereth as gay. Not that Im homophobic, I just dont see Jereth being one. And Toby? Well, almost seems like incest.

R