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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading chapter 22 and when I went back and saw that it has been a few years since an update I was a bit bummed. This story has held my attention from sentence one to the very last. It is my sincere hope that you will one day soon once again pick up and continue this narrative. I am interested to see what outcome that George and Riddick arrive at and how they get there. If you are still about on AFF and read this please feel free to send me a private message on the forum side; I am registered under Arkaad_V there as well.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love it, love your writing. I hope you continue with it.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was recommended to me - I'm a huge huge Riddick fan and I rarely find fanfiction that is up to par. This story is so amazingly detailed I got sucked right in!
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I would love to see this finished!
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is incredible so far!
will more be up sometime soon?
will more be up sometime soon?
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is truely amazing!! The amount of deatails you add and the depth to which you explain each characters logic and thought process pulled me in and made Riddick and George come to life! At parts you can almost feel the sexual tension between the two,and the resulting sex is always HOT!
Thank you for the story so far! It is a great example to me as I try to find my own style of fanfiction writing. Please continue this AMAZING story as soon as you get the chance!!
Thank you for the story so far! It is a great example to me as I try to find my own style of fanfiction writing. Please continue this AMAZING story as soon as you get the chance!!
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Chapter 21 finally here and it was so excellent!!!! I'm chomping at the bit for the next chapter, don't be cruel and make us wait too long :)
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story! Talented and skilled writing, exciting adventure, hot prison sex, you've done it well. That I am the first reviewer is surprising, but there may be an explanation. The first time I tried to read this story, I made it a few paragraphs before giving up. The problem was the plural pronoun used - they/their - it makes that first section very difficult to read.
> "...red wolf through the mountains. They had heard that such beasts..."
I'm so glad I came back to read more, it's top quality writing. The slow build-up of tension and anticipation is realistic and steamy. Loved this sentence: ' “If you don’t get me naked right now Riddick I’m going to stab you,” George snarled...' HAHAHHAHAA!! The culmination (or kick-off) of their 'boredom control sessions' is great; long, hot, creative, and did I mention sexy?
The frequent use of the word 'orifice' turns me off a little. It's a fun word, but brings up the image that she has no lips. Otherwise I love your word choice, it shows artfulness.
Keep writing, I'm a fan, and you've got a rare thing going.
> "...red wolf through the mountains. They had heard that such beasts..."
I'm so glad I came back to read more, it's top quality writing. The slow build-up of tension and anticipation is realistic and steamy. Loved this sentence: ' “If you don’t get me naked right now Riddick I’m going to stab you,” George snarled...' HAHAHHAHAA!! The culmination (or kick-off) of their 'boredom control sessions' is great; long, hot, creative, and did I mention sexy?
The frequent use of the word 'orifice' turns me off a little. It's a fun word, but brings up the image that she has no lips. Otherwise I love your word choice, it shows artfulness.
Keep writing, I'm a fan, and you've got a rare thing going.