errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I look forward to reading more. Please add me to your update list.
schedule
May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, really looking forward to the next one :)
schedule
May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I nearly wasn't going to check AFF for any updates, but I'm bloody well glad I did. An update from Musey, and a darn good update too.
Pity Vanika's outfit was too short to hide a weapon OR Pity she couldn't have bit something off, hehe. It would serve him right.
Poor O'ni, and poor Da'ar for having to do Bha'ruk's dirty work.
Can't wait for more updates. For all your stories.
Pity Vanika's outfit was too short to hide a weapon OR Pity she couldn't have bit something off, hehe. It would serve him right.
Poor O'ni, and poor Da'ar for having to do Bha'ruk's dirty work.
Can't wait for more updates. For all your stories.
schedule
May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!! *Double look* You updated!
I cannot wait for another update! You've got an amazing story going on here! LOVE IT!
I hope everything works out... And no more women are captured, or that Lrya is hurt... >.<
Good luck!
I cannot wait for another update! You've got an amazing story going on here! LOVE IT!
I hope everything works out... And no more women are captured, or that Lrya is hurt... >.<
Good luck!
schedule
May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn and just when it was getting good to
schedule
May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW..this was not what I was expecting to see. Thank You so much for updating this..really enjoyable story!
schedule
May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter Muse. So good to read another of your wonderful compositions. Our hero is truely awesome!
schedule
September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muse, you ever gonna add more? I love this story. Really wanting her to be saved!
schedule
November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All right, finally able to review this chapter.
As always musey, you never disappoint! What I simply enjoy most is how you are still developing your characters so well and making them quite unique. Take Da'ar and Bha'ruk for example, two sides of a coin they are, so evident when comparing each of their thoughts when Lyra was in her bad state. One so thoughtless and selfish and the other thoughtful and understanding. I also enjoyed the dialog between Da'ar and Ta'al and how it showed more depth to their friendship and understanding of the problems they have had to go through.
I still am wondering now how O'ni is going to fit into things, now that he's been replaced and injured. There was always something mysterious about him and I'm curious on what that may be.
Again, your great strength is being able to visualize everything with your words, such as the place Lyra went near death, or also the garden, and describing things like the stench of death and blood. It all adds up to make it such an engrossing read.
Well, bravo as always musey. I'll certainly be looking forward to what you have in store next! Sorry this took so long too :)
-DGD
As always musey, you never disappoint! What I simply enjoy most is how you are still developing your characters so well and making them quite unique. Take Da'ar and Bha'ruk for example, two sides of a coin they are, so evident when comparing each of their thoughts when Lyra was in her bad state. One so thoughtless and selfish and the other thoughtful and understanding. I also enjoyed the dialog between Da'ar and Ta'al and how it showed more depth to their friendship and understanding of the problems they have had to go through.
I still am wondering now how O'ni is going to fit into things, now that he's been replaced and injured. There was always something mysterious about him and I'm curious on what that may be.
Again, your great strength is being able to visualize everything with your words, such as the place Lyra went near death, or also the garden, and describing things like the stench of death and blood. It all adds up to make it such an engrossing read.
Well, bravo as always musey. I'll certainly be looking forward to what you have in store next! Sorry this took so long too :)
-DGD
schedule
November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yet another good chapter, looking forward to more, i hope she will be ok