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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent story so far. things are definatly heating up. can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You are an extremely skilled writer, this story is fantastic.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is another really good Predator story. It is nice to see that the females are not human, but other aliens. It is a good change of pace. Thank you.
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope there is an update!!!! This story is awesome and i'm glad your sharing it with us... Please update soon... Thanks
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow I like this new dark Yauta. Maybe something will happen between him and Natra. I love this story and I'm so glad you updated!!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool another chapter.
I love him dreaming about "his Natra"
I love him dreaming about "his Natra"
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, it made me extremely satisfied for some odd reason(question mark)Keep up the good work, update soon.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I am just so glad to see that you are still writing and continuing this story. I must say that I found this chapter to be extremely well thought out and kept me quite interested to say the least. I really am liking the way you are developing your characters and introducing new ones as well.
I shall definitely be keeping a sharp eye out on this one and am looking forward to more down the line.
-DGD
I shall definitely be keeping a sharp eye out on this one and am looking forward to more down the line.
-DGD
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'v never read a predator fic before and it's only now that I see what I'm missing out on!I love this fic and can't wait for you to update!
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh the plot thickens this is getting all the better my dear and I look forward to reading more