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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good so far I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story - I hope he doesn't hurt her.
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As my interest in Predator stories slowly returns, I was happy to see this one updated. And you know of my dark streak, so hehehe.... I will be watching this one intently. =)
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that you had updated Musey. I hope Ta'al can some how get Lyra or all of them away from Bha'ruk.
Top stuff young lady.
Top stuff young lady.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an excellent opening chapter to a story. I really hope that you will continue on with it as the characters and situation are very interesting and complex. Kind of a nice change to not have an 'ooman' around and rather another alien race, makes it more original. Again, I look foward to future installments.
I also really enjoyed your other story "What you never know..." and hope you'll continue that one someday too. :)
I also really enjoyed your other story "What you never know..." and hope you'll continue that one someday too. :)
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance*
Can’t wait to read more. I’m waiting to see what kind of trouble she’s found herself in and if there’s any hope of escape. Will mummy come to lay the smack down in search of her missing daughter or will ‘Mister Grab-em-tits’ help her put some distance between her and her new owner? And then there’s the matter of what she’ll have to do between now and escape, if she even can … so many, many possibilities. In any event, let me stop ramblin’ and tell you simply, great start.
Can’t wait to read more. I’m waiting to see what kind of trouble she’s found herself in and if there’s any hope of escape. Will mummy come to lay the smack down in search of her missing daughter or will ‘Mister Grab-em-tits’ help her put some distance between her and her new owner? And then there’s the matter of what she’ll have to do between now and escape, if she even can … so many, many possibilities. In any event, let me stop ramblin’ and tell you simply, great start.
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing first chapter. How dark are you going to take this? I am anxious to find out and will eb checking for more.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is different. I can only imagine what horrors await this female. I will be checking in for more. Good start
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much, it is different and full of mystery. I do hope you continue with it.
Ar'Shiya
The Death Warrior
Ar'Shiya
The Death Warrior
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Most impressive Musey.
The information we are getting about Bha'ruk reminds me of the serial killer/collector Casanova from the movie/book "Kiss The Girls." The question is, what is going to happen to Lyra? She sounds like a strong woman and she won't break that easily. She'll give Bha'ruk something to think about.
The information we are getting about Bha'ruk reminds me of the serial killer/collector Casanova from the movie/book "Kiss The Girls." The question is, what is going to happen to Lyra? She sounds like a strong woman and she won't break that easily. She'll give Bha'ruk something to think about.