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for Come Back to me

by LadyLabyrinth

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schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic. I liked the song he sang in the movie too. Kudos.
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this, i thought it was perfect :)
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well i thought it was good, but unlike some others, it can either be contiued, which would be wonderful, or ended. your choice. I liked it though and hope you choose to continue it.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of the story, but you kind of need to add more details. It seems you are in rush to get the story over with. But overall, I do like it, and try getting a beta or spell checking your work.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is officially the first Labyrinth fic I've ever read, and what a lovely little story! I've read lots of fic but I tend to stay within a fandom/pairing and not stray... but I read a quote from the movie today and thought, "why haven't you looked that fic up?"

Anyway, lovely. :)
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its an interesting story so far, but holding off updating for reviews is bogus. Keep up with your writing...and be careful of typos. I've enjoyed this tale thus far.
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
being review hungry is no reason to delay posting...but i guess here is a review for you.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are evil aren't you??? LOL Please update!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter