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Yes! Keep it coming!

No, I don't think going out there would be a good idea. Man, I'm on pins and needles as to what could happen next.

Thank you. You've made my week so much better with this update. I'll be waiting for the next one with much excitment as to what will happen next.

Yes! I've been waiting for this for so long. I'm glad you updated! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh no! The chapter can't end this way, not with a cliffhanger. I hope the next chapter comes soon, I want to know if John is okay. I must know! I liked this chapter as much as the others.

With every chapter you write is the more I love this story. I can't wait to see what John chooses with such a temptation in front of him.

Cool, an update! I can't wait to get more. ^_^

Okay.... please explain this to me. So Paris of Troy is the Therion's father, and Paris is upset by what his son is doing to Jack, and the Therios in confused by why his father is not impressed by his manly manliness? And, Lucy wants John to be his Consort, since he feels that John should have been his child, and since he could not have John as his child he will have him as a lover. And the Jack's twins have now become full grown demons. Is all of this right?????????????? Oh, and I love the story!!!!

Yep, you've got it this far!

I find this to be the best piece of writing that I have read this whole year. What I like about your style of writing is how you give emotions to everything. I have truly felt Jack's sorrows and joys while reading and have developed quite a large hatred for the demon that is too stupid and ignorant and blinded by ambitions of an army to develop some empathy for Jack. The lust he has is so primal that it's sickening. Don't get me wrong, it's a perfect part of the story and I wouldn't want it any other way. It's just, you gotta feel sorry for Jack and angry at his poor excuse of a mate. I really hope they bind him to a human body and that Jack shows him who's the bitch. =D

I must say, I laughed quite a bit when I read your warning about the Jesus/John sex scene. It really did appear quite silly. The same chapter is really deep and makes you glad that there are wonderful authors such as yourself to keep us awake until dawn reading.

Thank you for making me aware of my emotions and for really truly producing a great story that just puts people into the characters' place. I would have certainly killed myself in front of the Thyrion while saying something cool like "My body is no longer your temple!" if I was Jack. While it is a wonderful piece, it is also sad. So much torment and blood and carnage makes you think about what the forces of good are doing while innocent(?) people like Jack get raped by a demon with a gigantic member. Which comes to my question: How big is it exactly? I know it's supposed to be huge but you never told us in inches so I have a hard time imagining how it would be like.

Please keep me updated about new chapters. I really want to read the rest.

-A loyal minion who submits to your writing abilities which are bigger and better than Thyrion's cock.