rate_review Reviews

I just read the whole series back to back. AMAZING!


THERE ARE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE MY LOVE! OMG.
I wish there was more.

MORE!

I want to read some of the boys grown up?! Maybe they find their own human mates? That would be amazing!

Hi, Shalimar!
I am writing to congratulate for your wonderful "Deal series, " I started reading it last night and I couldn't stop until I finished the last chapter ...
Your style is fluid, the story intriguing and exciting. At first i was captivated by the Lemon, so i end up to love the plot that acquires depth from chapter to chapter. I like the characterization of your characters, the El's growth when she's becoming mother. Chak'tou is simply HOT.
I hope you read my comment, I'm a Italian reader / writer / fan, if you like, I would like to translate your work in my language, I discovered fanfiction "Predator" by chance, on "Fanfiction.net" and fell in love.
That is why I embarked on the project to translate English beautiful fanfiction: to help the development of Italian Fandom, because there aren't Predator's Fanfiction.
I leave you my email address, in case you want to contact me. [blood.sugar.sex.magik@hotmail.it]
See you, and congratulations again for your wonderful fanfiction!!

Ah... F******* AWESOME! =D

I love this entire series and how you have written it! it was amazing! i wonder if you would write a fic in the same universe with Kat meeting Lex... cause i think she is the human female you were talking about, but i could be wrong... wouldn't that be an interesting meeting? also i love the social structure you came up with, and the characters that lived it. i'd love to read more of your stuff! :glomp:

I know all good things must come to an end - but I have to tell you what a wonderful storyteller you are. - The characters, the story, (the sex) - were all so well written. I hope you will continue to write.

I am very glad you continued this. I loved the boys meeting each other and their interaction, the happy ending and the seamy sex-against- the- wall. This is a great story- BRAVO !!!!!!!

Shalimar is one of the best writers I have seen so far, her writings are more then stories, they are like some kind of force that pulls you into the heart of what you are reading, you become one of the characters. And that is something very rare with an author. I have only found one author that can pull me into her stories and that is my beloved Anne Rice. As far as I am concerned my Shali is right up there with her.

So Shali please keep writing your stories there wonderful and they make a dull and boreing life a little brighter.

Ar'Shiya

I like the interaction between the siblings, especially when Nhaw’che explained to Boyd his mum and dad just boned. Too funny. Kick ass as usual, Shali.

I absolutely love your fic. It was so awesome. When I read that this was the last chapter I was sad. But I'm glad it ended how it did. Thanks so much.

First off, I must say thank you so very much for this wonderful story. It's certainly not often when you have such an exceptional writing style create a scenario so interesting, I too am sad that it's ended. The way you created and grew your characters with their distinct personalities and interactions was simply masterful. You're a very talented writer and I do hope that you'll continue to make new stories in the future.

Heh, about that, I think it'd be cool to have a story about Nhaw'che and Boyd when they're grown up and on their first hunt on earth or something like that. Maybe bringing that idea of a "newly sexually mature male on a planet of females that smell too good" to fruition. :)

Oh well, once more, congratulations on a wonderful story.