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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang.
*tries to gather herself from the floor*
I just love the way you string words together. You weave a web with them, and manage to catch all the readers inside of it.
And I loved the little twist at the end, that Caleb was silently on the backround the whole time and heard the whole thing :D
*tries to gather herself from the floor*
I just love the way you string words together. You weave a web with them, and manage to catch all the readers inside of it.
And I loved the little twist at the end, that Caleb was silently on the backround the whole time and heard the whole thing :D
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, i like the end :P
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please make a sequel!!! i have to see the awaited reunion!!! that and what tyler will do when he meets up with caleb again... hehe. please!! i'll love you forever!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, great writing. Are you going to continue this?
I especially enjoyed how you focused on Pogue's voice, since that's all that Tyler could sense. Also, Tyler as the more submissive partner is totally hot, just what I like. Thanks for adding to this fandom, and I really hope you continue.
~Briar
I especially enjoyed how you focused on Pogue's voice, since that's all that Tyler could sense. Also, Tyler as the more submissive partner is totally hot, just what I like. Thanks for adding to this fandom, and I really hope you continue.
~Briar
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jebus!! That was definitely my favorite that I've read from anyone. I always found Pogue attractive, but you made him so much hotter with how he talked to Tyler and stuff. You should write about when he shows up to visit Tyler!!! This was awesome!!!!!!!