rate_review Reviews

Saw the movie and thought of your story. Usually I don't prod folks to update, but I have to with you. *poke, poke*

Mmmm. I like it a lot. Hope you continue. Please continue.

He’s becoming a bit of a bastard again and as for Molly-I’m still shocked she’s putting up with him dragging her friend away like that. I mean, the dick can’t be that good for her to turn her back on a friend like that, but maybe I’m wrong, lol.

Thanks for not making me wait too long between chapters, this thing reads like a Soap Opera.

Thanks for the reviews! I know that some of you are confused by Molly's behavior, so I thought I'd try to lay out her thinking a bit for you. Molly isn't the least bit happy with Jennifer's current situation, but she also knows that she can't win a full out arguement with Henry. She knows that Henry is dedicated to the survival of their little rag-tag group by any means necessary. She's hoping to be able to rationalize with him. Also, as crappy as it may (or may not) sound, she really does love him and sees him as the first stable constant in her life since the infection began: although she cares for her friends as well, she truly sees Henry as her chance at a safe and stable future, and she doesn't want to lose him. It's going to be a battle of the minds, and we'll just have to see who wins out. :-)

Ah, my favourite new guilty pleasure!

These two are so sugary sweet. Molly has taken to being Henry’s quiet well, like right off the bat. I just wonder if Jen is going to split them up, just because it seems as if Molly is the type to stick up for her friend and Henry just won’t give a damn since she’ll have to do whatever the flip he says.

Very Eeentersting development can’t wait to read more.

The misuse of colons was a bit of a distraction, and the “scream for me duckie” made me laugh out loud but I enjoyed this thoroughly. Somehow you made the bastard thing he was doing, a little less bastardly-if that even makes sense. It was amazing how genuinely gentle you made him and the actual act was hawt.

This reads like a fabulous one-shot. I don’t know where you’d go from here, but I’d definitely read the next instalment.

Good deal.