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for The Bad Touch

by reineSeele

schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awee come on! i wanna read another chapter of this story! so not fair :( i hope it gets updated...one day
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is the best Friday the 13th story I have ever read. I love the way you wrote Jason too- oddly innocent and confused yet lethal and dangerous. Very sexy :)

PS. You've now got me hooked on Friday the 13th. Thanks!
person Adrianna
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update I think this story is Hot and very interesting :)

person entropy
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... hot.

i loved the ending. poor jason.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, you can write incredibly well!!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Muse told me this was good but I didn't think it would be THIS good!!!*runs to take cold shower*
So you got droped on your head too ay? =3
person Keen
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first of, realise I had to come back and sign in to comment so that alone says how fantabulous this is.

I love how you deal with Jason’s inexperience. I love that he’s totally Little Mermaid-“WTF iz this called? Tit?” about her body and slowly gains momentum. And I positively and thoroughly enjoyed the twist at the end. I was SO not expecting that.
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...not that I'm a fan of "Friday the 13th", but wow. I do like your style here, Aggie. Going from the urgent rush in the beginning to the sudden halt and slow proceedings from there. Very nice, and thank you for sharing. ^_^

~Muse