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for Violets Sexual Adventure

by RottingCorpse

schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did not remember making this challenge until I happened across this story. Anyway, it's certainly off to a good start. Do you mind if I continue it?
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a start, I just hope you keep going
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept. Look forward to where you go with it.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
seconds please ....no seriously you must add a second chapter
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's not too bad at all. I wouldn't say it was great, but it is only the frst chapter and you have so many directions you can take this in and all of them will make this a great fic. For example, what's her mother going to tink when she does some aundry and finds Violet's clothes stained with cum? probably that one of the men of the house has been doing something he shouldn't.
I can't wait to see a second chapter.