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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have a brilliant way of personifying these characters in such a way that the whole situation doesn't even seem contrived or out of character (like it sometimes tends to do). Seriously, I'm amazed at how well you pulled this off, with the casual remarks leading to more intense encounters. Beautiful!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! It's a very difficult genre to find, Breakfast Club Yaoi. Nice job, two thumbs up, well written. Yes, there should be a comma there, but it's still a run on sentence.
Other than that, perfect!
Other than that, perfect!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I smiled and basked in the fuzzy warmth that spread through my belly.
8D I watched the movie today for like the 230487238947293847th time and was like "..... slash time!" so I instantly got on the 'net. xD;
Beautiful story. Believable. I loved it.
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8D I watched the movie today for like the 230487238947293847th time and was like "..... slash time!" so I instantly got on the 'net. xD;
Beautiful story. Believable. I loved it.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing :)