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by unknownsoldier

schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked this story! It was really great! I know what you mean about getting bored with a story, especially when you get a good idea for another one. Happens to me all the time! But this was a great story!
person Seralyn
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your storie

i like stories that keep to the storie line but add a J/E pairing

Great job

i love that they named the baby after Gibbs it was so sweet and perfect.

keep up the good work

Cheers
Sera
person rosaseravo
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter a lot, it's your best written yet I think. (BTW I'm tiamary on livejournal.)

I've noticed that the most positive J/E fiction is here. It must be something about feeling free to write sex scenes that puts people in a good mood. OK, that last line was a joke, but it's true, there's less angst and more joy on this site than any other I've seen. Since this has been my first holiday season since my mom's death, I need all the joy I can get, so thanks!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful love story!!! I really love it. I had a boyfriend in the Navy when I met my future husband. He told me he was going away for 3 yrs and didn't want me to be unhappy. He too loved me enough to let me go. I still love him for it. After 12 yrs married to my husband and best friend, we are both very good friends with my ex. He is currently dating another good friend of ours.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent story so far, mate. keep them chapters coming!-kotd
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. I love this fic.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh they finally did it! I'm all tingly inside haha, I can't wait for the next chapter. I guess they're gonna be at it like bunnies from now on? =D I'm sorry about you working so many hours and I can appreciate you taking time to update. Brilliant chapter, well worth the wait!
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schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
deeply hearfelt! Sincere and honest, not just lust. That's the dream we all hold about Captain Jack.

Beautifully written!
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, great chapter! Kinda disappointed that nothing happened but at the same time I really liked it. I prefer it when they actually wait for it because it makes it all the more sweeter. Plus it builds the tension and you can really see how much Jack loves her by waiting for her. Although I did like his comment and about Willy to Marty that night :P Made me chuckle
Cant wait for an update!
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schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! :D Both stubborn, but what can you expect? I like the idea of having to keep drinking the water from the FOY (Like the philosopher stone) It makes the whole living forever thing seem so much less daunting
Cant wait for the update
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