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person Lin

schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Wow, now there's some creativity.
I especially enjoyed his interaction afterwords with Mikaela

person Kettle

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM

When I get lonely and I'm sure I've had enough
She sends her comfort coming in from above
We don't need a letter at all

We got a thing
That's called radar love
We got a line in the air...
Radar love

(In case you can't tell - I really liked this ;-P)

person AkiraYamamura

schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM

. . . I now feel warm and fuzzy. XD

person Tab

schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Optimus' character was so very sad in the movie, and you brought across the loneliness and even a little bit of the hope very, very well. I enjoyed this greatly.

person HardcoreHorrorChick

schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM

That was beautiful. Sad, and beautiful. Poor Prime...I'm sure she IS out there, somewhere...I wanna hug him...

person mel

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM

omg
beautiful!

person Solaris

schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM

This story is so good.
And yes, it is a stand alone but it could also be a forshadowing of what's to come from you.
Maybe we will see another story come from you with Elita showing up or something.
You are a really good author.
I put into my recommended readings your other Optimus story. That is good too.

person PsychoKitty

schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM

That was amazing. I never really though how a transformer would masterbate. This was exactly how I would assume it would be! Great job!

person Anon

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Very nice. I really wanna see female Autobots in the next movie.

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