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for Sand and Vacuum Cleaners

by CGH

person GirlWhoLovesAni
schedule May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Never thought of an Autobot getting off on a vacuum cleaner. Nice work. :3
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story. to this day all I have to do to make mysister smile is look at her and say "Shop-vac"
person Faramir
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*falls over cackling* I love it! *offers cookies*
person Leeana69
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I don't think I've ever laughed so hard.
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD!! You hand me laughing so much once I got to Primes part. Man, I loved it (and the last line too XDD)
person Lin
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing for oh so many reasons
The concept is hysterical (that is why i read it)
but i did not expect to get aroused by the premise (talk about your awkward, yet pleasant surprises)
person Yukkie
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Ra... That was... HILARIOUS!!!! XDDD Poor Optimus!! lmao! Oh my Ra... That was perfect... Damn, Ratchet kept making me laugh with his dialogue. I loved it when he left the room! XDDD Dear Ra... Ohhhhh Ra... XDDD
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Oh my Goddess that was hilarious! You write very well and that was just genius material =D
person tari
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story but could you give better warning when you are gonna swithch perspectives. I got confused when the dialogue repeated.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was flippin' hilarious. XD
I could totally see something like that happening, too. lol

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