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Thank you for the update! It's never too late they say... Waiting for the next chapter :)

I love all 3 chapters of this, Jack and Lizzie are wonderfully well-written, and in-character. great stuff!!!

Loving it! Can't wait to read more!

Oh, goody!!! You posted another installment to the on going adventures of our favorite married pirate couple. This one was amusing from beginning to end. I LOVE Lizzie's "another sword" and how she reminded Jack of his "jar of dirt" ditty (heehee). Additional points are awarded for making him pout again. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

I'm pleased to see that you've added some new vignettes to "Wobbly Legged Rum-Swilling Pirates". I reviewed that story under the name Lisa, but I now have an account here; so, my reviews will be under this name.

Well, on with the review. Jack and Lizzie's first fight as a married couple is a humdinger probably because they are both so DARN stubborn. I wanted to throttle them both throughout most of this chapter for being too proud to apologize. I LOVE Lizzie throwing Jack's rum rather than the book (heehee). Jack DID deserve the slap for calling his wife by her maiden name, but I LOVE how she turns it around on him later by refusing to address him as "captain" (heehee). I like how astute Jack is in figuring out that Lizzie loves him more than the freedom that he can offer her, but it is good to hear her admit it later in the chapter. I LOVE when Jack grabs her before she can exit the longboat, and I really LOVE the "mine" discussion. I could have used more description in their sex scene. Their reunion was rushed, but that's my only complaint with this chapter. My favorite moments were when Jack and Lizzie debated her "standing with the crew", and they welcomed her back aboard, and Jack kicked the door shut on their cabin. As an aside, why is it so sexy when a man does that?!! Oh, well. This was a very nice addition to your fic.

Oh, what a cute fluffy chapter. I really like how it starts with Jack all cuddled up with Lizzie. What we fangirls wouldn't give to have that same experience. Ahem!! Back to the review. Jack declaring that he doesn't get sick and pouting about Lizzie taking over the Pearl for the day were great. I LOVE pouting Jack. I don't think there is anything more adorable on this earth than watching that character turn into a pouting child. Lizzie snatching his hat was perfect too. This was a short and very sweet chapter. I can't wait for the next installment, and I HOPE Jack is all better by then. Poor baby!!

AWW!! I hope Jack gets better!!

Awwww, that was too cute :)

Hi! I like it, but it's way too short! I need more soon..;)

I liked it very much, Very nice. I hop eyou poast again soon, I look forward to reading more