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schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:DDD Good one, luv! I realy enjoid that one. So far, so good! Unfortunetly just one chappie, deary! I want more! Soon..
PP: Ya have talent for writting(especially Jack & Lizzie). Keep the goods!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh I like! Update soon!
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals* Aww! I LOVED it! It was amazing, and so beautiful! Oh so beautiful! Please, write more of these!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wowweee, what a brilliant chapter. I loved your previous story, this one is just as amazing. I really thought he was gonna let her leave, but then I didnt but...I dont know! I was scared, okay? :P Haha tut tut Jack, if anyone was gonna break it was obviously gonna be him! Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully it's as emotionally packed as this one. I was in tears and everything!
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schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story!! This is my first time here, so I haven't read your first story yet, but now I'm hooked. This chapter was awesome! I loved the way you set up the tension between Jack and Lizzie and kept building it, with neither one of them wanting to give in. I was screaming at them!! LOL!

Can't wait until you update. I love reading stories that are set after Jack and Lizzie are married, but there just aren't that many out there :(

Keep up the good work :)
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I ever reviewed the first... I loved that story. It was one of the first Sparrabeth fics I read. Love the start here.!

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