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for Dare you to move

by Blackbunny

schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do I think? I think you NEED to finish it Black Bunny! You got me hooked and then just left me hanging. What kind of evil person are you! (JK)No for realy I love it but you do need to finish it.
person Drew85
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person JossiKun
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it'll be awesome so i'm hoping that you update soon^^
person CandiceM
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Promising. Too many typos however, and its way too short, you should check your layout aswell. On a good note however, the storyline is good, and the idea behind it is also great. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good start
person Gaia173
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Tryan! i have been hoping that somebody would post some Tryan for, like, forever. Thank you, and happy writing!
Gaia

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