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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More would be nice! I'd love to see what happens!
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you set this story up; it was a great idea to leave a document behind for Bee to read. I was never much of a Transformers fan, but I like this story. :)
My two favourite lines in this story are, "All this time I harboured a desperate hope that someday you would look at me like at something more than just your car…” because it's so sweet and "Stop, you naughty Autobot," which is hilarious.
My two favourite lines in this story are, "All this time I harboured a desperate hope that someday you would look at me like at something more than just your car…” because it's so sweet and "Stop, you naughty Autobot," which is hilarious.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was amazing. I'm so bummed it's just a one-shot! Please do consider adding more chapters; you're a very talented writer, and I'm finding it hard to find fics I like for Transformers! :-) It all seems to be OptimusxMegatron for some bizarre reason... ;-)
Thanks very much for sharing htat! :-)
~Kryss
Thanks very much for sharing htat! :-)
~Kryss
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NUMMY!!! With an extra dash of yummyness on the side ^_~V
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Are you going to do more with this story? Like a continuation with some sort of explanation as to how Bee is in two places at once and so on and perhaps another steamy love scene? Anyway good job on this.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Make another chapter please telling what happens...Continue this please