rate_review Reviews

That was smokin' hot!! Loved it! And it inspired me to write a fanfic of my own. Great story!

This... is the first BeeSam-fic I've read, ever... and you had me pretty much all over the place with the absolutely wonderful sense of humor that you portrayed in this rather... odd relationship. I laughed myself silly when you suddenly had Bee spanking Sam with a flyswatter and that electrical toy! I must say, I'm rather stunned that you ventured out on such deep waters since I myself havent dared use such material regardless of the more graphic content in some of my works. Seriously, that brought standing ovations! As usual I find no grammatical errors whatsoever and neither did I notice any typos. On the other hand, considering english is only my third language, I'm not the right person to comment on such trifles.
Indeed, a stunning piece with everything that such a work requires.

Thank you for sharing this with us as well.

Izumi

CRUD! This puts a new twist to DOM Bumblebee! But why is Bee away from Sam for so long? Why is he no longer Sam's 'guardian'? I'm glad that Sam and Mikaela married and successful and Mikaela is very understanding towards Sam's relationship with Bumblebee. But whoa... what a fic!

Wow very inventive. Bee scares me just a little bit in this one. ^-^ Who new he was so sadistic? Probably too much time surfing the net for gay porn I guess. Anyway, not bad at all. Very intersting use of an Autobot's functions and even the back story for Sam and Mikeala was pretty decent. Nice.

whoa! That was so kinky and hot!
I loved it.
=)

that's awesome man !!